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Was boored and inspired, lethal combination. :P


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lightsource a bit too vague imo..

but nice concept 8)

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cin - master of lightsource

Every sig he's critical about it XD :love:
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dom wrote:cin - master of lightsource

Every sig he's critical about it XD :love:

hehe :P

well but in most sigs its like this low opacity big white brush thing oO
cant help it just dont look like real light on most :(

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pretty nice ^^ maby the c4d looks abit out of place, but the rest i love :)

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Very cool idea, but plagued with continuity/scale errors.

Shadow underneath c4d shouldn't be entirely crisp, it would blur out according to distance from the ground, so the right side of the shadow would be sharp, but progressively blurry towards the left.

The way the shadow on the c4d is being projected it has a single light source directly or nearly directly above it, which would mean the fishes shadow would be closer to us, or further down depending on how you look at it. Also due to that the fishes shadow wouldnt touch the platform.

The platform the people (I think its people) are walking on seems very pasted in to me, and it doesnt look like its scaling down enough to imply distance considering close to us are these giant fish. Proportionally it doesnt seem to fit.

Uber lightsource doesnt match your shadows and an alien ufo has just finished beaming up a cow from the pasture. (hehe j/k, upper left corner)

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Mellow and bright lights don't work well together XD
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Shadowman20818 wrote:Mellow and bright lights don't work well together XD


*slaps shadowman* YES THEY DO :love:

You showed me this the other day

+1 the c4d looks a bit out of place
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i like the 3dness of it all
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I like it. It made me think something like, "If Salvador Dali had PS, he'd have made that." lol I kinda liked the contrast of the sharp C4D and the softness of the rest of the image.
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Rizla wrote:Very cool idea, but plagued with continuity/scale errors.

Shadow underneath c4d shouldn't be entirely crisp, it would blur out according to distance from the ground, so the right side of the shadow would be sharp, but progressively blurry towards the left.

The way the shadow on the c4d is being projected it has a single light source directly or nearly directly above it, which would mean the fishes shadow would be closer to us, or further down depending on how you look at it. Also due to that the fishes shadow wouldnt touch the platform.

The platform the people (I think its people) are walking on seems very pasted in to me, and it doesnt look like its scaling down enough to imply distance considering close to us are these giant fish. Proportionally it doesnt seem to fit.

Uber lightsource doesnt match your shadows and an alien ufo has just finished beaming up a cow from the pasture. (hehe j/k, upper left corner)

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Thanks Riz, im not done with it yet still working on light and shadows.

And the blue part in the upper left corner must be a c4d gone wrong. :P
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