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NSR~ Will Smith (Rizla please comment mine xD)
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:14 pm
by HavinFunSince89
pls rate my new sig and I gethered and used all your comments and used it on this so this took me a lot of time to do.
If you want to give comments again its ok It'll help me a lot and thanks for the criticism hehe
P.S.> Rizla I especially followed your long criticism from my last sig and used it here
thanks tho for showing my mistakes.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:28 pm
by cin
just the lightsource that looks a little odd imo. i like the effect left of his
head, n the txt is pretty good (could be moved up a bit imo).
lighting is a bit weird.. not the right direction.. n not the right color (too white)
7.5/10
edit: o n imo it also looks a little empty on the left n right of his head
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 3:08 pm
by Luoma
i really like Will Smith but you got him looking kinda old lol!
otherwise its nice
7/10
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 5:26 pm
by Snudge
Focal point looks LQ, and it's a floating head... Gief neck.
And, to me, the light on the focal should be coming from the left, but that could be just me.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 8:13 pm
by TwelveEleven
Luoma wrote:i really like Will Smith but you got him looking kinda old lol!
otherwise its nice
7/10
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:16 pm
by Rizla
sharpen/find a better render, needs some work on blending between your two main bg colors, but dont overdo it subtlety is key because the bg is just a support structure, not a highlight. Text looks good in structure but seems pixelated a bit.
Guys guys guys...you do realize you dont HAVE to see the lightsource in a picture? This could be accurate (thought slightly awkward looking, perhaps tone it down a bit) if he is portraying the light hitting wills face washing out the surface of the "wall" (bg) behind him.
++floating head.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 10:27 pm
by dom
cin wrote:just the lightsource that looks a little odd imo
XD
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 10:02 am
by HavinFunSince89
ok thanks for your comments and so next time I'll know what to fix and btw he has a neck it just in the stuck its quite hiddent and cant really be seen that why I lieft a space in the btm oh well thanks anyway
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 10:09 am
by BrokenSaint
OMG use periods pl0x!
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 10:20 am
by HavinFunSince89
hmkay
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 1:23 pm
by 0l3n
BrokenSaint wrote:OMG use periods pl0x!
Stop saying pl0x, pl0x!
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 1:38 pm
by BrokenSaint
0l3n wrote:BrokenSaint wrote:OMG use periods pl0x!
Stop saying pl0x, pl0x!
But... but...
pl0xz lol
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 5:24 pm
by Rizla
0l3n wrote:BrokenSaint wrote:OMG use periods pl0x!
Stop saying pl0x, please.
No really, pl0x is not a logical abbreviation of the word please, it even requires more keystrokes in a conficguration that requires more movement over a keyboard. On a microscale it conveys to me that the person using it is retarded, as not only is it illogical -- most people dont get it, therefore you may have to elaborate on your intended message, causing extra time wasted on such a simple thing as please, or pls.
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 5:57 pm
by Luoma
Rizla wrote:Stop saying pl0x, please.
No really, pl0x is not a logical abbreviation of the word please, it even requires more keystrokes in a conficguration that requires more movement over a keyboard. On a microscale it conveys to me that the person using it is retarded, as not only is it illogical -- most people dont get it, therefore you may have to elaborate on your intended message, causing extra time wasted on such a simple thing as please, or pls.[/quote]
What a random and interesting post O.o
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 9:59 pm
by BrokenSaint
Yar!
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 12:55 pm
by HavinFunSince89
ya just give a simple pls hehe