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NSR~Imagine new sig
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 11:37 am
by HavinFunSince89
comments,criticism anything you want pls give and p.s. pls dont be harsh

Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 11:47 am
by 0l3n
Text is getting better...
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 11:51 am
by HavinFunSince89
thanks man hehe but what about the rest of the sig what do you say about it?!?
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 11:58 am
by Rizla
0l3n wrote:Text is getting better...
between this one and the current, I would have to strongly disagree.
Text is nearly impossible to read, odd font color scheme (try pulling the hues for the font from the skin tones on her face)
whoa c4d. Using 3d abstract renders is a perfectly fine method of getting effect lighting *but* I think its fair to say that within our community it is something you attempt to obscure -- anyone on the street would say "whoa, cool!" So, Artists - No Consumers - yes...which could be good or bad depending on how YOU feel about it.
Floating head syndrome...where is the head coming from? Give us a bit of neck or something
Effects need to be adjusted for some kind of flow through the image, which will be extremely difficult considering you have a circular focal point (the girl), centered in the page, with conflicting 3d render blobs.
lower left of the face, some kind of quark near her chin/corner of mouth, looks odd, same on opposing cheek, kinda looks like she was burned with an iron or something as an infant. Bleh, I digress, so...thats about it from me

kiu.
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 12:46 pm
by dom
Not a big fan of the text, or the background. The background is too busy and sharp for something to be in the back plan. However, i'm sure rizla went over that already.
His post looks rather big and scary, i'm just going to hope I didn't repeat what he said.
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 12:47 pm
by BrokenSaint
Rizla wrote:0l3n wrote:Text is getting better...
between this one and the current, I would have to strongly disagree.
Text is nearly impossible to read, odd font color scheme (try pulling the hues for the font from the skin tones on her face)
whoa c4d. Using 3d abstract renders is a perfectly fine method of getting effect lighting *but* I think its fair to say that within our community it is something you attempt to obscure -- anyone on the street would say "whoa, cool!" So, Artists - No Consumers - yes...which could be good or bad depending on how YOU feel about it.
Floating head syndrome...where is the head coming from? Give us a bit of neck or something

Effects need to be adjusted for some kind of flow through the image, which will be extremely difficult considering you have a circular focal point (the girl), centered in the page, with conflicting 3d render blobs.
lower left of the face, some kind of quark near her chin/corner of mouth, looks odd, same on opposing cheek, kinda looks like she was burned with an iron or something as an infant. Bleh, I digress, so...thats about it from me

kiu.
Pretty much said everything I was going to post. :O There is, however, a lot of erasing flaws.
EDIT: Oh and you dont need to put "new sig". NSR = New Sig Rate
lol.