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First Sig

Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:50 pm
by carLo
Image
C&C pls

Re: First Sig

Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:51 pm
by Raiden
carLo wrote:Image
C&C pls

I...

LIKE it!

8/10

Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 11:17 pm
by Rizla
Work on some alternating effects. Work on selection, your focal has white edges. Work on lighting, yours is sporadic and conflicting. I dont like the border.

4-5/10

Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 11:30 pm
by CrimsonNuker
too monotone

5/10

Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 11:46 pm
by MasterKojito
a border and some text would be good. 6/10

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 6:38 am
by 0l3n
Rizla wrote:Work on some alternating effects. Work on selection, your focal has white edges. Work on lighting, yours is sporadic and conflicting. I dont like the border.

4-5/10


+1

OT... long time no see Raiden.

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 11:58 pm
by carLo
k, thx all for the criticism. Ill keep it in mind when making a new sig.
Rizla wrote:Work on lighting, yours is sporadic and conflicting.
Any suggestions?

Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 12:14 am
by Shadowman20818
carLo wrote:k, thx all for the criticism. Ill keep it in mind when making a new sig.
Rizla wrote:Work on lighting, yours is sporadic and conflicting.
Any suggestions?

Make it less random and hypocritical.