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My First Attempt at Making a Sig..

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:30 pm
by Isis
I know it isn't as good as some of your sigs, but this is my first attempt at making one :)

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:37 pm
by HavinFunSince89
kinda simple but nice egyptian style make some adjustments and I bet it will rock. keep up the gud work

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:43 pm
by Isis
HavinFunSince89 wrote:kinda simple but nice egyptian style make some adjustments and I bet it will rock. keep up the gud work


I wanted it to look simple :P But have you got any suggestions of what I could do please..

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:56 pm
by iBilly
Well the border completely overpowers the whole thing.

The background/stock you have used is so dark it's hard to really see anything.

There's no distinct focal point.

No real effects used.

No lighting whatsoever.

Text... meh.

I strongly advise you to find some tutorials for sigs & large art pieces, you will improve like everyone does.

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:56 pm
by Tatianasaphira
Bastet wrote:
HavinFunSince89 wrote:kinda simple but nice egyptian style make some adjustments and I bet it will rock. keep up the gud work


I wanted it to look simple :P But have you got any suggestions of what I could do please..


Since your name is the Goddess of the Cat, perhaps a Cat image, or a bit more of the gold along the edge..

But for simplicity sake, it is good

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:19 pm
by TwelveEleven
iBilly wrote:Well the border completely overpowers the whole thing.

The background/stock you have used is so dark it's hard to really see anything.

There's no distinct focal point.

No real effects used.

No lighting whatsoever.

Text... meh.

I strongly advise you to find some tutorials for sigs & large art pieces, you will improve like everyone does.


+1

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:17 pm
by Isis
I wanted to come away from the cat image..

I didn't want some thing that was over powering and nothing that was busy..

The background is the pyramids at Giza, you don't need much detail to relise what they are.. and the border is made up of Hieroglyphs..

It was the font that I don't like and I couldn't find anything that I really liked :(

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:27 pm
by dom
Cool idea. I'd use the pen tool trace it, and clean out the lines. Add a black boder, not yellow.

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:37 pm
by Tatianasaphira
Bastet wrote:I wanted to come away from the cat image..

I didn't want some thing that was over powering and nothing that was busy..

The background is the pyramids at Giza, you don't need much detail to relise what they are.. and the border is made up of Hieroglyphs..

It was the font that I don't like and I couldn't find anything that I really liked :(

Then what you could try is perhaps putting a lens filter over by the sun to brighten it up. Also maybe tone down the background since 'some' people have such issues with it

Papyrus for the win...

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:46 pm
by Rizla
Do not use papyrus please.

One thing I noticed is the picture isnt very good quality, try http://www.flickr.com and look for a better pic to use.

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:49 pm
by Snudge
Rizla wrote:Do not use papyrus please.

One thing I noticed is the picture isnt very good quality, try http://www.flickr.com http://www.photography.com/ http://www.sxc.hu/ and look for a better pic to use.


Fix'd ^^

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 7:05 pm
by cin
Rizla wrote:One thing I noticed is the picture isnt very good quality, try http://www.flickr.com and look for a better pic to use.

quality prob might be cause its made in paint

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 8:41 pm
by Rizla
paint doesnt compromise the original photo quality.

Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 8:43 pm
by CrimsonNuker
yeah the stock you used was kinda bad quality..

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:44 pm
by Isis
Ok.. I've tried using the original pic again.. As I had re-sized the other, so I lost some of the quality..Hope that looks better.

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 4:19 pm
by dom
What I was talking about was retracing it like so:


Image


Got bored and decided to give it a go.

Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 11:57 pm
by Dystopia
U made that out of scratch dom?

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 1:13 am
by CrimsonNuker
Dystopia wrote:U made that out of scratch dom?


Thats my dom. :love:

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 3:15 am
by Rizla
dom wrote:What I was talking about was retracing it like so:


Image


Got bored and decided to give it a go.


looks sharp ;)

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 3:29 am
by Knuckles
I agree, that's quite catchy :)

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 3:16 pm
by Isis
OK... I've changed it again. Hope this one looks better. :)

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:02 pm
by cin
i like the colors behind the pyramids 10x better than before.
sig is a little too big now imo :P

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 5:08 pm
by Tatianasaphira
But it is beautiful...makes me regret not being able to see them in person (stupid family not coughing up the money...)

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 5:09 pm
by Shadowman20818
You should make it smaller and remove the link, petite=better.

Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 7:17 pm
by corkscrew
i think its nice, simple but nice, the sunset looks very realistic, but it seems like my main focus is the border, you should do something with that

Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 7:32 am
by iBilly
Lol Dom, why do I like that little creation of yours so much? No idea, but you seem to have a nack for creating stuff out of nothing. Good show.

Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:17 pm
by Isis
I think I will make it a little smaller, wanted to keep the border. But maybe make it smaller in size.. Hmm don't know.

Hehe can't do it now, I'm at work :P