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my new sig xD comments
Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 1:02 pm
by HavinFunSince89
I just want some comments on my latest sig and as I said before I will make a better one well here you go

btw check out my deviant art
http://havinfunsince89.deviantart.com/

Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 3:09 pm
by Valkasdar
its good but the colors ... hm... try more warm colors to use I dont know this is like death colors

Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 3:43 pm
by Rizla
yeah your color scheme is...well it just...it doesnt work, if I could name this as a flavor, it would be kiwi-strawberry-puke, and it just doesnt sound tasty.
Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 5:18 pm
by Dugu
Green and pink are supposed to be complementary but I think you should go for more of a cold green. I agree with Rizla that the colors here just don't work at all. Although it portrays warm colors the light green background clashes with the vivid pink on top and your render, which is red & pink. Maybe color burn the green with a darker green, and go a little colder, maybe purplish. The color blurbs next to the render once again clashes with the light green, light on light doesn't not work in this case. The pink strokes could be a little less opaque, it's really taking away from the render and the effect just doesn't combine well with the rest of the work.
Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 6:19 pm
by Luoma
i like this one

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 2:26 am
by LM
Rizla wrote:yeah your color scheme is...well it just...it doesnt work, if I could name this as a flavor, it would be kiwi-strawberry-puke, and it just doesnt sound tasty.
rofl! Try making those pink things over there into clipping masks and try making the BG a little brighter. I think your trying to portray the girl as being in darkness and she is light but i'm afraid it's not workin. Try changing up the bg into a beach or a nice skyline or something not too dark. I hope i have helped you and this time i didn't criticize. You got that?
Anybody up for some Kiwi-Strawberry-Puke shake? Yummmm....

Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 2:33 am
by BrokenSaint
LOL. Well, think about it, a girl sitting in the sunlight (Title of that sig in his devart). The lighting doesn't really make sense. She's wearing shades afterall maybe you couldve fixed the lighting and the color choice doesn't really work. Does have flow though.
Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:17 am
by Snudge
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[url=http://lamusica.deviantart.com]My DA[/url]
My DA
Try this in your sig, LM.
