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Rate teh sig
Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 11:26 pm
by cin
I was bored @ work and made Hyo a sig.
I know im not a pro, but i kindof like the result myself
Just curious what you guys think of it.
render used:
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/3327/d ... ium9xu.png
some thingy with light used:
http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs9/300W/i/ ... heaven.jpg
result:
just some simple comment and a -/10 rating

Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 11:51 pm
by pherball
fugly beyond belief.
J/p, it's nice, 7/10.
could use some smudgin
the text is all up in the focal point's business too
could make a wallpaper with that render..

Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:15 am
by shadowman20875
7/10
The light in the background can use more work, the fact that the edge of the light is curving kind of bothers me.
Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 12:20 am
by TwelveEleven
Make the lightning less photo like..
Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 2:16 am
by Xyzzzy
see, I knew you shouldnt take my advice too seriously
XD
the only thing from me is the crossbow
Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:26 am
by Rizla
3/10 for one very critical reason:
If light is hitting that axe like shoulder-piece thing, and the helmet is casting a shadow onto it, then the side of his helmet facing us should be lit up like a christmas tree. (ok ok, not like a christmas tree, but brightly

)
Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 2:36 pm
by cin
Rizla wrote:3/10 for one very critical reason:
If light is hitting that axe like shoulder-piece thing, and the helmet is casting a shadow onto it, then the side of his helmet facing us should be lit up like a christmas tree. (ok ok, not like a christmas tree, but brightly

)
ur right.
i started off with a light foreground, then added lightsource in the back
ill try edit it later on. thnx for the replies ppl

Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:52 am
by aazumak
text is good and there is a focal yay, i like, i just think maybe if u added another stock or did a bit more it would be alot better but i am liking this one, gj m8
Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:28 am
by MastaChiefX
I like it.
6.5/10
Is kinda bland tho. Could use some spicing up.
Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:40 am
by Grim
Yeah, its pretty bland.
7/10