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skull divers
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:04 pm
by aazumak
well i made this for skull diver
how do u guys feel about it?
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:14 pm
by Rizla
flow and depth are wonderful.
the bottom of your ribbon seems too grey, I say just fade it out overall or clipping mask just the bottom.
text ruins it. you would be much better off making it horizontal and placed together.
8.5/10 without text.
6/10 with the text.
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:08 pm
by aazumak
where would u put the text?
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:21 pm
by Priam
mmm i'm not feeling the render, it kinda looks randomply placed in there to me.
still 7/10 though
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 1:35 am
by CrimsonNuker
Rizla wrote:flow and depth are wonderful.
the bottom of your ribbon seems too grey, I say just fade it out overall or clipping mask just the bottom.
text ruins it. you would be much better off making it horizontal and placed together.
8.5/10 without text.
6/10 with the text.
+1
7/10
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 6:46 am
by skulldiver
as posted in the request thread, really like it aazumak
thanks !