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My first gift sig: Exality :)
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:52 am
by SuicideGrl
Hope you like it :)
c/c plx....
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:57 am
by BrokenSaint
Nice. IMO, the background seems dull. Besides that it's cool. I'd give it a 7.5/10
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:20 am
by Stompy
Nice for a first sig. Very nice. The background really doesnt go to well with the rest. Bu tnice for a first. keep it up

Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:34 am
by Rizla
O think you could easily gain a more symbiotic feel by grabbing the shapes in the background and make a clipping mask off the car. I think the text should be as bright and vivid as the car, the car looks good, I like how it reacts with the border from the headlights, but the motion blur/smudge in the back shouldnt affect the border imo -- that makes it seem like the whole car is above your border.
6.5/10
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 2:26 am
by exality
ok so here it is ...i LOVE it but i do think that the border shouldnt be affected^^stated above^^ and is the white triangle in the windshield sposed to be there???
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 2:35 am
by rek
The car is great with how u makeit look like its moving but like other people said the background is a little plain, mayb add some colour to it and fix some lighting
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:12 am
by SuicideGrl
stock:
the white triangle is in the stock, i'll see what i can do to tone it down. also, border issue fixed. added some color to bg.
old:
new

Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:15 am
by exality
thx soo much I LOVE IT!!!!
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 5:33 am
by Rizla
7.5/10 on your revision, gj!
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 5:39 am
by Skitsefrenik
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 3:21 pm
by SuicideGrl
you mean shift the car right and rotate it to follow the road you outlined? lol i actually moved the car more left because i didn't want it to be so centered. just a different perspective i guess. thanks for the comments guys :)