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first 3dsM signature
Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:14 pm
by Rizla
This is my first piece using any type of 3d render, not looking for just a 1-10 rating here but an objective critique, and Im not sensitive. Please be honest and keep subjective comments to yourself. The render and the photo are original, as well as the composition. I bring it here because I am impressed with a lot of the work I see coming out of this forum.
(the grey is to present a dropshadow on the forum it was designed for without using GIF or PNG8 transparency)
Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:20 pm
by BrokenSaint
Wow, that looks awesome. In my opinion I think that would like nice in black and silver. It's really cool though, you should use that sig instead and replace your old ones.
Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 12:23 pm
by bladecarlo
COOL!!
Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:41 pm
by CrimsonNuker
Amazing, link brushes plz
also, make it .gif
Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 12:43 am
by Rizla
I didnt use any custom brushes, everything I used is stock photoshop cs3.
Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 2:08 am
by shadowman20875
amazing render
only thing, some of the 'light' seem out of place, around ur render, imo they would look better as streaks rather than just... there
Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 8:31 am
by rek
cool...abstract 8/10
Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 8:43 am
by PureOwnage
Get rid of the grey around it. Add a light source and Ill give it 10/10 atm its an 8/10
Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 12:54 am
by Rizla
Thank you very much for the CC everyone
I have learned a few places I could improve!
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 3:54 pm
by CrimsonNuker
Looks like riz owns us all here.
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 3:55 pm
by cin
omfg edge txt o.O
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 4:01 pm
by Snudge
cin wrote:omfg edge txt o.O
AHAHAHAH!
A BIG, FAT,
PWND!
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:28 pm
by Rizla
cin wrote:omfg edge txt o.O
where? where? o.0
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 11:05 pm
by Itonami
I really, really like it. 'Tis the sweetness
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 5:31 am
by Peety
Agree with the above posters. Love the colors and render, but the fuzzy text just doesnt go along with the abstract render.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:02 am
by Rizla
Peety wrote:Agree with the above posters. Love the colors and render, but the fuzzy text just doesnt go along with the abstract render.
appreciate critiques, even if its on old stuff
check the post date.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:09 am
by TwelveEleven
The almighty "Offering" applies here *Whistles* SNUDGE!!!
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 8:52 am
by Snudge
TwelveEleven wrote:The almighty "Offering" applies here *Whistles* SNUDGE!!!
*Sees chicken*
*Screams like a girly*
*BOOM*
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:10 am
by 0l3n
Snudge wrote:TwelveEleven wrote:The almighty "Offering" applies here *Whistles* SNUDGE!!!
*Sees chicken*
*Screams like a girly*
*BOOM*
Not the chicken again
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:30 am
by cin
0l3n wrote:Snudge wrote:TwelveEleven wrote:The almighty "Offering" applies here *Whistles* SNUDGE!!!
*Sees chicken*
*Screams like a girly*
*BOOM*
Not the chicken again
aight lets take the pinguin this time
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:33 am
by Snudge
cin wrote:0l3n wrote:Snudge wrote:TwelveEleven wrote:The almighty "Offering" applies here *Whistles* SNUDGE!!!
*Sees chicken*
*Screams like a girly*
*BOOM*
Not the chicken again
aight lets take the pinguin this time
YES PLEASE! The penguin made me kill Crim!
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:34 am
by Rizla
Lol it's official. My necro'd post has now been hijacked.