First attempt

Toasty · Post by **Toasty** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 11:33 am

What do you think of this, and how do you think i could improve it?

First attempt so be nice.

pantrofl · Post by **pantrofl** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:22 pm

its kinda.. empty lol also i dont really like the tekst.. but thats me..

urtoasty · Post by **urtoasty** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 2:23 pm

nice name

Toasty · Post by **Toasty** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 2:27 pm

And you lol.

hitokiri · Post by **hitokiri** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 2:31 pm

try making it smaller and that way it wont seem as empty. but keep at it.

Toasty · Post by **Toasty** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 2:39 pm

I've made it a bit smaller now and yeah i think it looks better, thanks.

hitokiri · Post by **hitokiri** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 2:42 pm

Try going like 400x135, think thats what i used to use. you slowly get them smaller and get used to it. that and get some brushes. Try putting colors you find in your render into the background to help it blend a bit. and dont feel like you have to fill every space, sometimes not being completely brushed looks better.

Toasty · Post by **Toasty** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 2:46 pm

HTVHitokiri wrote:Try going like 400x135, think thats what i used to use. you slowly get them smaller and get used to it. that and get some brushes. Try putting colors you find in your render into the background to help it blend a bit. and dont feel like you have to fill every space, sometimes not being completely brushed looks better.

Ok, ill try that and have a few more attempts when i've got some more free time.

0l3n · Post by **0l3n** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 3:18 pm

First I have to say that Its not bad for a first attempt.

Now comes the constructive criticism :twisted:

The glow on the render is bad so just loose that. and the background needs some more work, you should blend the render a little (there are tutorials on that). The text is to big for my taste and you havent done to much with it.

But like i said its not bad for a first attempt.

*Looks at his first sig and cries*

Nave47 · Post by **Nave47** » Fri Feb 16, 2007 9:27 am

At least its better than my first try.