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Space that is not alive

Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 7:18 pm
by chrisorg
First smudge sig in like a year
Im satisfied with the result but what do u peepz think?

Image

Re: Space that is not alive

Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 9:42 pm
by poehalcho
very good, but remove text. It honestly looks pretty great, maybe only contrast between sharp and smudge is too strong. Try going with a light smudge over the rest of the guy as well :?

Re: Space that is not alive

Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 10:33 pm
by Skyve
Really nice. I find the dark smudge particules around certain area of the render a bit annoying, the rest is great.

I lol'd. Dead Space = Space that is not alive. :giveup:

Re: Space that is not alive

Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 12:05 am
by Kraq
Dead Space, focal smudge, and clipping masks, looks very generic and boring.

Try adding more effects and some more color.

Re: Space that is not alive

Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 2:42 am
by McLovin1t
i like the effects and that stuff, render looks great. but the text... not so much idk why

Re: Space that is not alive

Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:44 pm
by chrisorg
Thanks guys for your comments :)