Hot and steamy fluids.... wat

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Hot and steamy fluids.... wat

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Something new to chew on

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Looks good man. Love the space stock and bubbles :D I also especially like the "lips+clipping mask". Guess the render could be a bit more blended though.

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Gonna be honest, not my favorite of your work. I like the bg a bit, and the effects around the render, however the render, focal, lighting, and I guess the artificiality of it don't really look too great. The light fading seems artificial, and the render coloring looks off.
I'm sorry for being critical, it's wayyyyy better than anything I could do.
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Was the distorted line on the right intentional?

Anyway, I like how the effects compliment each other on top of the space stock but the tag in general suffers from Floating Head Syndrome and over sharpening. I don't know what the rest of the stock looks like so maybe you made the right call but I would suggest shrinking the size and getting more of the body in there to add a bit of dynamic and flow. I'd even try adding more colours with the "bubble" effect to balance all the cool tones out.

Other than that it's good, I like it.

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Thanks guys for your comments...
Yeah, I get that floating head thing now :D sadly that pretty much is the whole render. After a good nights sleep I see the flaws myself... shouldn't really makse sigs when Im sleepy heh... The line was intentional
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chrisorg wrote:Thanks guys for your comments...
Yeah, I get that floating head thing now :D sadly that pretty much is the whole render. After a good nights sleep I see the flaws myself... shouldn't really makse sigs when Im sleepy heh... The line was intentional

I love making art in a half-dozed state, so much creativity oozes out.
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