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Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:22 am
by Shomari
I think cheese is cool.
But Personally I would not want to hang out with cheese.
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Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:27 am
by Skyve
Looks great so far, but it seems unfinished. Maybe you could do some fancy background.
WHERE'S THE CHEESE?! 
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:12 pm
by Luiei
Someone just shot the head off that bird?
Looks cool though.
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:23 pm
by Tasdik
ExSoldier wrote:WHERE'S THE CHEESE?!
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:42 pm
by omier
I see the red thing as the bird's head and it's looking behind.
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 6:04 pm
by Apollion
omier44 wrote:I see the red thing as the bird's head and it's looking behind.
Tasdik wrote:ExSoldier wrote:WHERE'S THE CHEESE?!
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 6:09 pm
by Majorharper
Apollion wrote:omier44 wrote:I see the red thing as the bird's head and it's looking behind.
Tasdik wrote:ExSoldier wrote:WHERE'S THE CHEESE?!
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 6:28 pm
by Apollion
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 6:56 pm
by Gnarly
Wow, looks great!
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 10:43 pm
by poehalcho
isn't the bird's back a bit too straight?
And I enjoy myself by imaging the bird's head is exploding xD
thank you for this sadistic fun.
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 11:14 pm
by Toasty
ExSoldier wrote:Looks great so far, but it seems unfinished. Maybe you could do some fancy background.
WHERE'S THE CHEESE?!
Nooooooooooo... dont change the bg!
Something about the red doesnt quite seem right. As in, the saturation or the strength of it.
Love your style btw, always gotta check out your threads.
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 11:50 pm
by inky
I like it a lot. You really differentiate yourself from other artists. Most people who visit OTL/AC can probably tell which ones are your pieces. I like the simplicity of it but if you really want to add more, I'd say more gray/red coming from the lower right. Follow the flow of the 'explosion' ..anything else would go against it or ruin the simplicity altogether.
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 4:10 am
by CrimsonNuker
I wanna see a video of your making your things from start to end >:(
I wanna learnnnnn, LET ME BE YOUR PADAWAN
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 5:38 pm
by Tasdik
CrimsonNuker wrote:I wanna see a video of your making your things from start to end >:(
I wanna learnnnnn, LET ME BE YOUR PADAWAN
Are you cheating on Dom?
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 12:44 am
by Gaigemasta
Tasdik wrote:CrimsonNuker wrote:I wanna see a video of your making your things from start to end >:(
I wanna learnnnnn, LET ME BE YOUR PADAWAN
Are you cheating on Dom?
He can both at the same time
ONT:
it looks like a birds head got shot off, lol you're really into adding triangular shapes in anything aren't you
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 2:58 am
by McLovin1t
IMO, way too much empty space. Just my amateur opinion though
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 3:36 am
by Shomari
omier44 wrote:I see the red thing as the bird's head and it's looking behind.
Took me so long to see that.
I see it now.
Gaigemasta wrote:it looks like a birds head got shot off, lol you're really into adding triangular shapes in anything aren't you
CrimsonNuker wrote:I wanna see a video of your making your things from start to end >:(
I wanna learnnnnn, LET ME BE YOUR PADAWAN
-Haha a video will likely never happen. [I work on/off a lot]...and I make too many mistakes. :|
-Honestly there isn't much to learn. there isn't any amazing trick I'm doing. no secret button. Just feel the force you must.
Thanks for the appreciation guyz!
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:23 pm
by Shomari
Added finished version
Re: Cheese is cool
Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 11:26 pm
by Hostage
.PSD please. Let's make it a collab; a few ideas popped into my mind after seeing the finished version.
On a off note: I'm on my laptop I got both your logos so I'll update the thread once I pop in my new GFX card on my desktop and get it running.
