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Heart&Soul
Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 9:15 am
by Skyve
- Signature #66
- Okay I swear, last smudge for a while.
- What do you think could improve?
Re: Heart&Soul
Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 1:26 pm
by rek
Depth. It makes a piece pop.
The light on her arm is oversharpened, it has that jaggy look.
But all in all, looks pretty sweet.
Re: Heart&Soul
Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 11:04 pm
by Skyve
Now that I look at it, it's messy
Re: Heart&Soul
Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 11:41 pm
by RogueKiller
Bring out the focal and the lighting doesn't really match the background.
Thats what I think could improve.
Re: Heart&Soul
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:13 am
by Shomari
colors
-not the hue , the chromaaaaa
-looks sorta flat
-arrow elements don't really fit.
Re: Heart&Soul
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:58 am
by Skyve
Shomari wrote:colors
-not the hue , the chromaaaaa
-looks sorta flat
-arrow elements don't really fit.
What
Re: Heart&Soul
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 3:23 am
by Shomari
saturation?
Re: Heart&Soul
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:25 am
by Skyve
Shomari wrote:saturation?
Oh my bad, had no idea it was also called chroma.
Re: Heart&Soul
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:25 am
by Skyve
Shomari wrote:saturation?
Oh my bad, had no idea it was also called chroma.
