Heart&Soul

Skyve · Post by **Skyve** » Tue Dec 14, 2010 9:15 am

- Signature #66
- Okay I swear, last smudge for a while.
- What do you think could improve?

rek · Post by **rek** » Tue Dec 14, 2010 1:26 pm

Depth. It makes a piece pop.
The light on her arm is oversharpened, it has that jaggy look.
But all in all, looks pretty sweet.

Skyve · Post by **Skyve** » Wed Dec 15, 2010 11:04 pm

Now that I look at it, it's messy

RogueKiller · Post by **RogueKiller** » Wed Dec 15, 2010 11:41 pm

Bring out the focal and the lighting doesn't really match the background.
Thats what I think could improve.

Shomari · Post by **Shomari** » Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:13 am

colors
-not the hue , the chromaaaaa
-looks sorta flat
-arrow elements don't really fit.

Skyve · Post by **Skyve** » Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:58 am

Shomari wrote:colors
-not the hue , the chromaaaaa
-looks sorta flat
-arrow elements don't really fit.

What

Shomari · Post by **Shomari** » Thu Dec 16, 2010 3:23 am

saturation?

Skyve · Post by **Skyve** » Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:25 am

Shomari wrote:saturation?

Oh my bad, had no idea it was also called chroma.

Skyve · Post by **Skyve** » Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:25 am

Shomari wrote:saturation?

Oh my bad, had no idea it was also called chroma.

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