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My artworks

Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:17 pm
by jaksje
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So this is my first creation in photoshop cs 5 extended :)

tips or comments are very welcome :)

Re: My artworks

Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:50 pm
by inky
I like it in general but one of the first things that came to mind when I first looked at it is the text. In comparison with the rest of the image, it's a bit too sharp. Also, it's kinda hard to decide how to position it since something about the text touching that "glowline" really bothers me.

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Re: My artworks

Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:21 pm
by BuDo
its nice...for a first time I say bravo...well done

Re: My artworks

Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:02 am
by SM-Count
streak of light ruins it for me

I'd replace it with something that's not a streak of light :p

Re: My artworks

Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 9:43 pm
by tweaklizer
How do you do the text like that, anyone wanna make me a guide? then send me the link or somthing :)