Bloodseeker

[Skyve]

Had to do it. Again, try to master my smudging here. Took note from my last one and added more effects (C4Ds and such).

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[poehalcho]

I'm thinking maybe the left side is too red. also, a lot of empty space =/.
cut off the edges and it should be fine :P

[inky]

Looks pretty good to me. The "empty space" really doesn't bother me since it gives the impression that the subject is popping out of a lava pit =D

If anything, the text is a bit too opaque. Other than that, it seems perfectly fine to me.

[Skyve]

I'm thinking maybe the left side is too red. also, a lot of empty space =/.
cut off the edges and it should be fine

Maybe a even smaller version would be better then?

Looks pretty good to me. The "empty space" really doesn't bother me since it gives the impression that the subject is popping out of a lava pit =D

If anything, the text is a bit too opaque. Other than that, it seems perfectly fine to me.

What I was going for

As for the opaque text, added a new font with 85% Opacity. Don't know if I should use this or the current one

Spoiler!

[Luiei]

On the new one, move the text a tiny bit right so it isn't in his head. ^^

[McLovin1t]

I like v2