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Rage

Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:37 am
by noobert mclagg
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Decided to do another GW sig lol. C&C plz

Re: Rage

Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 1:45 am
by Shomari
uhh big sig is big.
Take out the text.
uhh add more stuff? lol

Re: Rage

Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:29 am
by Deadsolid
You have a good start. Crop it to put more focus on the focal's upper body. There is a lot of blank space in the background. The destroyed buildings add only a little to what we already know by looking at the focal. They do add depth, but you are going to need to over come that by adjusting the signature after you crop.

On another note, I can see this being an LP if there was a bit more around everything, consequently making the piece larger.

At a bare minimum the text needs to go.

Re: Rage

Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 6:46 pm
by TheKnight
Where u get those stocks?