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They are transforming!!!

Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 7:46 pm
by MountainDew
:banghead: :banghead: Help me make it better :D suggestions critics are very welcome

VERY NOOB VERSION
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I think this one is better :) i will edit this post as soon as i make it look a little better thanks for the advice everyone :D
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Re: NOOBY TRANSFORMERS!!!

Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:00 pm
by Vaya
-it's too dark to see anything.
-this is not an appropriate size for a sig.
-lightings shouldn't be different on that character and background, try to blend them together
-don't get rushed and give yourself more time to make something better
-it's not about how much did you do, sometimes simple ideas can be good too
-don't try to modify this, better to make another one
-take a look at others' designs and find your inspiration there, and don't copy an idea .. make yours

Re: NOOBY TRANSFORMERS!!!

Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:12 am
by Skyve
MountainDew wrote::banghead: :banghead: Help me make it better :D suggestions critics are very welcome

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Main problem is the lighting. Notice how Ironhide is really dark while the background has its own lighting. To solve this use Dodge/Burn to play with the Lighting.

Re: NOOBY TRANSFORMERS!!!

Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 1:39 am
by Shomari
Too much contrast on transformer.
Too little contrast on bg and looks flat in color.

Re: They are transforming!!!

Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:01 pm
by MountainDew
:dope: bumpz :dope:

Re: They are transforming!!!

Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 8:05 pm
by Noobs_Slayer
Well 1st thing you have to fix is background and canvas size. Try to blend in and read tutorials ;)

Re: They are transforming!!!

Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:05 pm
by Deadsolid
This should get you started.
viewtopic.php?f=11&t=45762

Don't look at the individual techniques of those tutorials, rather look at the way the the sigs are laid out. the background is no where near as important as the focal, in this case the Transformer. There is very little that your particular background adds that we cant figure out from the focal to begin with so it is not necessary to have such a detailed and large background.

Good luck! Keep at it!