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[Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:51 pm
by Skyve
-- Render : Code Geass
-- I'd like you guys to pay attention to the location of the font. I'm having a hard time with it and trying to follow the rule of thirds.
-- One thing that also bothers me his collar going through the light source. I tried to erase but it looked even worse :P
-- Critics,Rate,Comments,etc.

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Darker Red
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Purple Eyezz
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Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:33 am
by noobert mclagg
I really like it, the font placement is good, very nice BG and smudging, and I also really like the effects. IMO this is prolly one of your best sigs.

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:49 am
by Heosphoros
The word 'Geass' is overly bright, and draws my eyes to THAT. It's basically a tug of war between that text, and lelouch's eyes. Try dulling the red down a bit on the Geass word. The small text below annoys me :/

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 3:28 am
by Skyve
Heosphoros wrote:The word 'Geass' is overly bright, and draws my eyes to THAT. It's basically a tug of war between that text, and lelouch's eyes. Try dulling the red down a bit on the Geass word. The small text below annoys me :/

I didn't know the guy was called Lelouch :P I wanna keep the small text but I'll try to change the red.

EDIT: Making the red darker was actually a good idea,I like it better.
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Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:52 am
by Kirkaldi
Wow. You are incredible at PS.

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 5:15 am
by McLovin1t
Kirkaldi wrote:Wow. You are incredible at PS.

Yeah I really like it :)

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:27 am
by maxietheboss
Wow, I like it. The background is really good. I also like the C4D lighting effect

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:31 am
by TheKnight
I like it, altough bright white/yellowish spot on ye middle confuses me a bit but really nice anyway!

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:45 am
by Heosphoros
Try tinting the light area in the middle a bit green, it might bring out the focal point a bit more.(complimentary colors)

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:17 pm
by Noobs_Slayer
Fix text and it will be all rait, you're gettin better

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:03 pm
by Scarth
That's by far your best sig up till now. Awesome job Ex! :D

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:22 pm
by poehalcho
I need to say it D:
remove the glow on the eyes, or drastically lower it >_<
it ruins everything.

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:45 pm
by magisuns
poehalcho wrote:I need to say it D:
remove the glow on the eyes, or drastically lower it >_<
it ruins everything.

do people honestly take ur "critiques" seriously? ur almost as bad as ns was

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:46 pm
by poehalcho
magisuns wrote:
poehalcho wrote:I need to say it D:
remove the glow on the eyes, or drastically lower it >_<
it ruins everything.

do people honestly take ur "critiques" seriously? ur almost as bad as ns was


I say what comes to my mind.

When I look at the sig, I notice that the glow around the eyes seems out of place. or simply too large.

and you might not have noticed it, but most people come to pretty much the same conclusion as me on many occasions (not always, but not nearly never)... they just choose their words more carefully/professionally than I do.

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:19 pm
by Skyve
poehalcho wrote:
magisuns wrote:
poehalcho wrote:I need to say it D:
remove the glow on the eyes, or drastically lower it >_<
it ruins everything.

do people honestly take ur "critiques" seriously? ur almost as bad as ns was


I say what comes to my mind.

When I look at the sig, I notice that the glow around the eyes seems out of place. or simply too large.

and you might not have noticed it, but most people come to pretty much the same conclusion as me on many occasions (not always, but not nearly never)... they just choose their words more carefully/professionally than I do.


Although I respect positive and negative critics. I don't agree on your point that everyone comes down to the same conclusion. If we go by your saying, no one likes the "red glow" just some people won't express it. What dosn't look nice to you may look nice to someone else.

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:23 pm
by poehalcho
ExSoldier wrote:
Although I respect positive and negative critics. I don't agree on your point that everyone comes down to the same conclusion. If we go by your saying, no one likes the "red glow" just some people won't express it. What dosn't look nice to you may look nice to someone else.


I said not always.

btw. an easy fix might simply be to make it more purple instead of red. it just kind of curses with his eyes. purple eyes with red glow looks awkward.

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:26 pm
by Skyve
poehalcho wrote:
ExSoldier wrote:
Although I respect positive and negative critics. I don't agree on your point that everyone comes down to the same conclusion. If we go by your saying, no one likes the "red glow" just some people won't express it. What dosn't look nice to you may look nice to someone else.


I said not always.

btw. an easy fix might simply be to make it more purple instead of red. it just kind of curses with his eyes. purple eyes with red glow looks awkward.


You said "not always,but not nearly never" which honestly dosn't make any sense. But I'm always opened for improvements so I'll try a purple glow on his eyes,brb :P

EDIT: Purple eyeezzzz
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Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:40 pm
by Miguez
Ehh Ex I still remember when you were doing your first signatures, and here you are now, I'm so proud. :drool:

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:45 pm
by Skyve
Thee_UniQue wrote:Ehh Ex I still remember when you were doing your first signatures, and here you are now, I'm so proud. :drool:

:P Was gonna do a montage of all my signatures but I'm too lazy :slap: Its way easier to learn if you go on GFX websites(I usually go on GFXResource)

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:48 pm
by poehalcho
a darker purple (this is pink), but I already like it much better ^_^

not always, but not nearly never = not always, yet not (even remotely) never :P

either way, keep up the good work, you are one of my more favorable artist here cause you actually show and use colours, instead of camouflaging them with 15 light filters.

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:57 pm
by Miguez
Yeah I know, I just kinda gave up on photoshop, obviously if I kept at it I'd be better than you right now.


jk jk

Re: [Ex] Code Geass // CnC

Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:25 am
by Noobs_Slayer
Thee_UniQue wrote:Yeah I know, I just kinda gave up on photoshop, obviously if I kept at it I'd be better than you right now.


jk jk

QQ =D