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[DRN] opinion bout this?

Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 7:32 pm
by Doron
I think it's too much...

then again, haven't shopped in ages..

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EDIT3: V2
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EDIT4:
V3
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V4
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EDIT: i liek leopard.

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original:
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Re: [DRN] opinion bout this?

Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:41 pm
by Skyve
Your focal isn't well rendered,but I respect the fact you rendered it yourself. I also love the leopard :D I'd just maybe change the "black spiral" because it seems pretty randoom.

Re: [DRN] opinion bout this?

Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:23 am
by Melez
remove the smudges behind your renders, it's ruining your blending rather than improving it

Re: [DRN] opinion bout this?

Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:54 pm
by Doron
it's their doubles..

I'll try to see if I can do that, but I have no idea if I saved it right...

Re: [DRN] opinion bout this?

Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:44 pm
by Doron
Added V3 and 4!

Changed the glowline, removed the doubles and removed the spiral