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I'm Back
Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:27 am
by noobert mclagg

First sig I made after coming back from a 1-2 month break so don't be overly harsh.
Re: I'm Back
Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:41 am
by McLovin1t
I love it, except for 2 things. The background is a little boring, and the render isn't blended in that well, but the claw looks AWESOME!
I'm also not too sure about the focal, my eye goes from the text, to the render, to the claw lol.
Re: I'm Back
Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:14 am
by Panu
Welcome back.
I'll say thats a pretty solid sig. Claw looks fantastic, text can use some word. The background is like a 50/50, its pretty good from the shoulder down but going up is pretty bland. Also your render fits just right, no need for smudging or blurring. Pretty good work man.
Re: I'm Back
Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:39 am
by Melez
That fractal on the right just doesn't fit, and don't overblur your bg. Make it look interesting

Re: I'm Back
Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 9:22 pm
by poehalcho
remove blur from arm
get better background, something sharper
use better text
effects on the blades look great.
Re: I'm Back
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:26 am
by noobert mclagg
Thanks everyone!
Re: I'm Back
Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2010 1:46 am
by Mirosuke
Font and bg.
Everything else it's SUPERB.