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Way beyond the horizon!
Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:30 pm
by Grounded
well hmm... one of my first jobs! i was bored and a little inspired!
=)
and so i did this! Any suggestions and appreciations are really welcomed!
Stocks:
1. thxs to "GothicSelene" from DeviantArt
2. thxs to "sheisprettystock" from DeviantArt!
Re: Way beyond the horizon!
Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:37 pm
by poehalcho
it wasn't a bad idea...but
1. It's very easy to see that the girl was just stuck on there.
2. The text needs to go away or least be changed to something that sticks out less...
I do like the heart you stuck up there...
Re: Way beyond the horizon!
Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:41 pm
by *BlackFox
It's pretty nice! But, I agree with poehalcho
You should remove that text completely.
Re: Way beyond the horizon!
Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:24 pm
by Grounded
poehalcho wrote:it wasn't a bad idea...but
1. It's very easy to see that the girl was just stuck on there.
2. The text needs to go away or least be changed to something that sticks out less...
I do like the heart you stuck up there...
thxs for the tips^^
1. im not sure of what u mean with the girl!
2. yeah i wasnt happy with the text! but without it just look empty lol imm try to reduce it or delete it at least
ty guys ^^
Re: Way beyond the horizon!
Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:52 am
by Crowley
Darling, he means that it looks like the girl is not really "in" the picture. Feel me?
Re: Way beyond the horizon!
Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:13 am
by Grounded
Tsume wrote:Darling, he means that it looks like the girl is not really "in" the picture. Feel me?
got it!
i deleted a layer and i didnt notice lol
i fixed it but im lazy to reupload lol
Re: Way beyond the horizon!
Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 7:29 am
by inky
I gotta be honest with you, I really didn't like it that much. I would suggest getting a "clean" background picture next time and just add the effects there yourself since this one just looks too awkward. The girl really looks copy-pasted and it doesn't give you the feel that she's walking through an open field. Just keep practicing and have fun

And yes, the text has to go.
