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Rate tha sig [updated]

Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 10:52 pm
by Noobs_Slayer
With this sig i won sig war on another forum 1st place:
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No C4D or textures. Only pen tool (to cut), Soft Round Brush, Stock photos. :) took about 7 hours
Friendly neighbour:
Introducing the power of pen tool
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Re: Rate tha sig

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:35 pm
by .Banshee
You have come far, but the tag almost has no contrast and the the line on the right side of the tag coming in horizontally to intersect the line running vertically ruins the great flow this tag would have had otherwise and it seems like me, you have the blur on lighten syndrome(either that or I'm dead wrong). Great job and keep it up.

edit: Background should have been blurred a bit more to give more depth

Re: Rate tha sig

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:11 pm
by Noobs_Slayer
.Banshee wrote:You have come far, but the tag almost has no contrast and the the line on the right side of the tag coming in horizontally to intersect the line running vertically ruins the great flow this tag would have had otherwise and it seems like me, you have the blur on lighten syndrome(either that or I'm dead wrong). Great job and keep it up.

edit: Background should have been blurred a bit more to give more depth

Gradients. Lines are part of effects. By the way thanx

Re: Rate tha sig [updated]

Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 1:54 pm
by Noobs_Slayer
Double post, Updated
Friendly neighbour:
Introducing the power of pen tool
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Re: Rate tha sig [updated]

Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:20 am
by rek
Whats with your fetish about the pentool?. Effects are minimum and boring, just because its pentool doesn't mean its enough. Compo need a lot of work, thus focal is all over the place. Depth needs work as well, adding some blurred shapes in the background does not instantly add depth.

Re: Rate tha sig [updated]

Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 11:18 am
by Noobs_Slayer
rek wrote:Whats with your fetish about the pentool?. Effects are minimum and boring, just because its pentool doesn't mean its enough. Compo need a lot of work, thus focal is all over the place. Depth needs work as well, adding some blurred shapes in the background does not instantly add depth.

Well i find it interesting to pen tool. Btw this is old sig so i already know my mystakes here :)

Re: Rate tha sig [updated]

Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:58 pm
by rek
Sure.