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I like it. I like the motion blur kind of effect and the colors and render blend real nicely. My only gripes are that it's kinda large and the text needs to be redone.
You could perhaps shorten it lengthwise and get rid of most of that left area. That way it wont look TOO big without having to really mess up the overall size. That way you could try putting the text along his arm and perhaps even curve up his armor for a cool snake-like effect. I'd personally try a darker transparent text inside rather than brightening it up and see how that looks.