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NSR~Watch Your Back
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:13 am
by Deadsolid
Well, I've been an ass in others' CnC posts, so here's your chance to tear me a new one.
This is the first since October, maybe.
v2.
Re: NSR~Watch Your Back
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:53 pm
by DumboDii
I'd like to see the render or stock you used.
I like the idea of it BUT those C4Ds ruins it. Remove them or make them less obvious and bright colored.
Re: NSR~Watch Your Back
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:29 pm
by Noobs_Slayer
Well if ask me i would say that it's completelly work of the newbie. Lack of depht lightining and text. Try harder next time and you'll get higher grade
Re: NSR~Watch Your Back
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:42 pm
by Deadsolid
Yea, in hindsight, this is a horrible piece. Im going to do it over today. The C4d idea came at the last second and I honestly have no idea why I added them in. It looked a lot better without. And the flow is pretty shitty too. So I'll post a new version tomorrow or later today.
Re: NSR~Watch Your Back
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 8:13 am
by BrokenSaint
How long did it take for you to do this?
Re: NSR~Watch Your Back
Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 2:10 pm
by inky
Looks promising but it really deserves to be revisited. I would suggest taking out the C4D and either adding a new one, working with pen tool, or whatever it is you think that might look good on it. Personally, I'd go with something asymmetrical so it won't look awkward.
Also, I'm not sure if it's the picture or just the girl's rugged cheeks that makes it look like a low-res .jpg image.
Our eyes, we haz them on you. =P