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NSR - Love the Nature

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:26 pm
by TheKnight
Kinda weird when its winter and im doing this kinda sigs, but as usual I fckd up with the text and some other things, but I just would like so comments, since my last one is kinda bad...

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Re: NSR - Love the Nature

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 4:12 pm
by Deadsolid
Wow, this isnt too bad.

I would do two things.
1)Sharpen the focal so there is a little more detail, it looks a bit blurred atm. Also erase any c4d that is laying over the focals face, body, and hand (leave the leaves on the left, those are a good touch).
2)Delete the text. Make a new text layer, with a white text color and a smaller font size and move it to the middle just under the bright green dot. Keep it all on one line as well.

I'm not too keen on "Love the Nature", but thats just me. Composition isnt bad, the bright green glowing dot could use some work but overall its a solid sig.
Good job.

Re: NSR - Love the Nature

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 5:08 pm
by inky
As mentioned, just a bit more cleaning on the face and some more work on the text. Gj man.