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NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:17 pm
by TheKnight
My Newest Sig, took around 45 mins to make, needed to remake after i went wrong with the Brushes xD
Text version
Updated version, Lulu (the Character on sig) is now at the top layer and layer mode is different
Renders Used:
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:33 pm
by Amarisa
i just stole your render XD
anyways it looks nice
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:54 pm
by .Banshee
^If this the critique given on a daily basis, then AC is truly dead, good thing I moved on. Instead of telling them what's good, give them what's bad as well

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this is bad for a 4th or 5th tag especially compared to your other ones. Right now it's just chaotic and no definite flow is clearly defined, the render randomly smacked in the left is a no no. The brushes are too dark and I see no lighting source. The focal has random brush strokes over it and that gives the appearance that the tag was hastily done and not much thought was put into it, I know this is quite the contrary though

. The text is too large and it takes very much from the focal, as well the text placement is place smack dab in the middle and it's opacity is greater than the original focal-the render- and that is a nono. The focal should stand out and be clearly defined.
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:59 pm
by Amarisa
.Banshee wrote:^If this the critique given on a daily basis, then AC is truly dead, good thing I moved on. Instead of telling them what's good, give them what's bad as well

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this is bad for a 4th or 5th tag especially compared to your other ones. Right now it's just chaotic and no definite flow is clearly defined, the render randomly smacked in the left is a no no. The brushes are too dark and I see no lighting source. The focal has random brush strokes over it and that gives the appearance that the tag was hastily done and not much thought was put into it, I know this is quite the contrary though

. The text is too large and it takes very much from the focal, as well the text placement is place smack dab in the middle and it's opacity is greater than the original focal-the render- and that is a nono. The focal should stand out and be clearly defined.
i'm sorry i'm still learning lol i don't know whats good and whats bad i mean it looks nice but i couldn't really say how it was bad.
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 1:37 am
by Mirosuke
Definetely not your best!
Try to set the layers in the right order.
Cause watching the sig i can tell u what u did there lol
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:52 am
by TheKnight
Updated
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 12:22 pm
by DumboDii
You should read this:
I didn't make this tutorial. All I did was cut little part of "Full Signature Tutorial by Senthrax"!!!
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 3:44 pm
by Mirosuke
hehe, now is way better.
See the difference?

Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:16 pm
by TheKnight
Yep.
I made picture as a .png, not as .xcf so i couldn't do anything else than put same render at the top of old render =)
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:58 pm
by Mirosuke
.xcf wtf is that

Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:07 pm
by TheKnight
Mirosuke wrote:.xcf wtf is that

GIMP file type, all the layers will remain as they are, not in one same picture.
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:23 pm
by Amarisa
Mirosuke wrote:.xcf wtf is that

only cool people know what that is
aka gimp users
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:27 pm
by Mirosuke
Amarisa wrote:Mirosuke wrote:.xcf wtf is that

only cool people know what that is
aka gimp users
-.- xD
>,> durr
Re: NSR - Final Fantasy
Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:47 pm
by Thomas42
Now I'll get a .psd to .xcf converter and store all the shit I do in .xcf format just so I can be cool too.