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NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:13 pm
by TheKnight
ok, thsi is overall my 5th sig so sorry it says 4th :P, Comments?

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Version 2, I think it isn't any better =(
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Version 3 -.-
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Version 4, I really can't make anything better without getting some tutorials to add depth with GIMP, and with Images, since my GIMP is in finish =(
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Re: By TheKnight

Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:57 pm
by Mirosuke
Not bad, the renders looks good, but the bg can be bettah

Re: By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:48 am
by Miguez
Needs depth and variety.

Re: By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:01 am
by TheKnight
I've read some tutorials for GIMP, im trying light effects today after schhol...

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 2:03 pm
by fckerr
Looks very nice but unfinished IMO.

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 2:24 pm
by TheKnight
I would need something to add there, but I just don't know what, any tips?

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:33 pm
by TheKnight
Updated, Version 2. Comments and Tips?

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:09 pm
by DumboDii
Well it's little bit "boring". There's no flow at all and text could be better. But since it's your 5th sig it's understandable. Just keep experiencing.

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:51 pm
by TheKnight
DumboDii wrote:Well it's little bit "boring". There's no flow at all and text could be better. But since it's your 5th sig it's understandable. Just keep experiencing.

What do you mean with flow? :P

And I made another version, added fractal render at the bacround and few other brushes, links to download brushes for gimp would be nice btw :)

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:01 pm
by *BlackFox
TheKnight wrote:Version 3 -.-
Spoiler!
looks awesome!

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:05 pm
by Shomari
It seems like you're just adding random effects, which makes it look a bit chaotic.
Try to control your effects and try to get a sense of depth.

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:57 am
by TheKnight
Shomari wrote:It seems like you're just adding random effects, which makes it look a bit chaotic.
Try to control your effects and try to get a sense of depth.

depth is what i won't understand, caussian Blur on the backround?

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:59 am
by Kirkaldi
TheKnight wrote:
Shomari wrote:It seems like you're just adding random effects, which makes it look a bit chaotic.
Try to control your effects and try to get a sense of depth.

depth is what i won't understand, caussian Blur on the backround?

that is one way.

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:02 am
by Amarisa
look through all mine

viewtopic.php?f=11&t=113969

i started out the same way

also if you need help with gimp message me on msn (or if you don't have just pm me)

ladyamarisa@live.com

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:47 am
by Shomari
TheKnight wrote:
Shomari wrote:It seems like you're just adding random effects, which makes it look a bit chaotic.
Try to control your effects and try to get a sense of depth.

depth is what i won't understand, Gaussian Blur on the backround?

What I usually do is make a new layer and apply image then I blur the whole thing and put a mask and erase parts that should be in focus.

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 2:58 pm
by TheKnight
Version 4 -.-
Im not going any forward with this sig -.-

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:26 pm
by Amarisa
TheKnight wrote:Version 4 -.-
Im not going any forward with this sig -.-


make a new one don't start making different versions until you learn a lot of the stuff in gimp

Re: NSR - By TheKnight

Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 4:41 am
by Miguez
Yeah I didn't remake any of my signatures past two times, that stuff is for pro people, you just keep 'em coming.

I feel tempted to go back and get better but I have so much to do, and I cba to re-download all the C4D, Renders, Fractals, etc.