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without text most definitely. The text could fit, and be better than both versions. Find a better place for the text and make sure it's not in a corner or on a border. Also don't put it on top of the focal just make sure it's close to it though. But you are doing superb, better than most newbies as a matter of fact.

.Banshee wrote:without text most definitely. The text could fit, and be better than both versions. Find a better place for the text and make sure it's not in a corner or on a border. Also don't put it on top of the focal just make sure it's close to it though. But you are doing superb, better than most newbies as a matter of fact.

I better not be a newbie. And he better not be doing better than me.

OnT: I agree with Banshee. You are improving really fast. Nice effects too. KIU.

No Kirk, unfortunately he is light years ahead of you according to your current tag.

OnTopic: You should have aimed the lighting source towards or behind her head.

Oooh, I really like the textless one. The background is really nice and easy on the eyes.

Thanks for comments
Now im trying to do smth new i'll post it pretty soon
EDIT
Fixed text and light source and here it is

no. remove the text.

i see to be browsing this section of the forum and i come across this that girl there looks like just about to scream oooooooyeahhhh
and + i like it very good