CnC ~[Look]

[Noobs_Slayer]

With Text:

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Without Text:

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[.Banshee]

without text most definitely. The text could fit, and be better than both versions. Find a better place for the text and make sure it's not in a corner or on a border. Also don't put it on top of the focal just make sure it's close to it though. But you are doing superb, better than most newbies as a matter of fact.

[Kirkaldi]

without text most definitely. The text could fit, and be better than both versions. Find a better place for the text and make sure it's not in a corner or on a border. Also don't put it on top of the focal just make sure it's close to it though. But you are doing superb, better than most newbies as a matter of fact.

I better not be a newbie. And he better not be doing better than me.

OnT: I agree with Banshee. You are improving really fast. Nice effects too. KIU.

[.Banshee]

No Kirk, unfortunately he is light years ahead of you according to your current tag.

OnTopic: You should have aimed the lighting source towards or behind her head.

[Sacchin]

Oooh, I really like the textless one. The background is really nice and easy on the eyes.

[Noobs_Slayer]

Thanks for comments
Now im trying to do smth new i'll post it pretty soon
EDIT
Fixed text and light source and here it is

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[Priam]

no. remove the text.

[DistortedMind]

i see to be browsing this section of the forum and i come across this that girl there looks like just about to scream oooooooyeahhhh
and + i like it very good