Seems like I'm finally back on my feet

[.Banshee]

CnC please

[Priam]

The left side, being still, kinda ruins the motion. I get what you're trying to do with the text, yet i still think it's missing that special touch.

The right side is brilliant.

[hitokiri]

Have used the same render so i am familiar with it, and I like what you did with it. I'd agree that the left needs more work where as the right looks great. I like the text except in the word Phoenix. The black of the background hits it in a weird way because of the opacity. Just doesnt look right to me, I'd maybe fix that and it might help it. But nice job.

[.Banshee]

yea the background did look awkward, but I think it would just be better if I didn't place it like that. In that position the background's flow is contrary to the focal's flow. Why didn't I see this