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NSR~On the move
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 2:25 pm
by DumboDii
B&W
I'd especially like to know what you think about the text. I personally think I some how made it look good at last.
V3
But yeah, CnC please.
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:51 pm
by Kraq
Looks really nice.
It would be better if you could add some more detail to the bigger ones.
Also, sharpen her a bit.
KIU
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:55 pm
by Melez
Work on lighting, it looks forced. ;d
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 9:59 am
by DumboDii
Bump
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:08 pm
by DumboDii
New version added. Sharpened it a bit.
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:52 pm
by DumboDii
Seriously someone
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 2:30 pm
by SM-Count
Render needs a lot of work. First of all, she's wearing clothes, wtf? That just doesn't work for this type of sig. Second, she's not attractive, again, not gonna work for this style. Third, your focal point. The render is supposed to be the focal, but the render is ugly/not naked and I'm forced to look away and I find that there is no focal, fix that--make a focal.
Free bump
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 5:23 pm
by Swindler
SM-Count wrote:Render needs a lot of work. First of all, she's wearing clothes, wtf? That just doesn't work for this type of sig. Second, she's not attractive, again, not gonna work for this style. Third, your focal point. The render is supposed to be the focal, but the render is ugly/not naked and I'm forced to look away and I find that there is no focal, fix that--make a focal.
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lol, wut?
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 1:38 am
by Kirkaldi
SM-Count wrote:Render needs a lot of work. First of all, she's wearing clothes, wtf? That just doesn't work for this type of sig. Second, she's not attractive, again, not gonna work for this style. Third, your focal point. The render is supposed to be the focal, but the render is ugly/not naked and I'm forced to look away and I find that there is no focal, fix that--make a focal.
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lol.
Re: NSR~On the move
Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 3:30 am
by Amelie
SM-Count wrote:Render needs a lot of work. First of all, she's wearing clothes, wtf? That just doesn't work for this type of sig. Second, she's not attractive, again, not gonna work for this style. Third, your focal point. The render is supposed to be the focal, but the render is ugly/not naked and I'm forced to look away and I find that there is no focal, fix that--make a focal.
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i lol'd
