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Crimson Space

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:18 am
by Kraq
Image
v2:
Image
Any cnc? :}

Re: Crimson Space

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:43 am
by fena
Very nice, although I think the sphere in the upper left hand corner looks a bit forced.

Reminds me of the Dreamworks logo.

Re: Crimson Space

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 2:34 am
by rek
mmm

Just need a little more depth. Looks really flat atm. But nice tag anyways. :love:

Re: Crimson Space

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 2:56 am
by Hostage
fena wrote:Reminds me of the Dreamworks logo.


Oh Shi--

It really does.

Like rek said it's really flat and your text is pixelled in some areas. Might want to play with sizes/settings. Or go back and show the edges some love with the blur and pentool, you'd be surprised how much it helps. Although I know the text is supposed to be the focus for some reason it's not working maybe do a little more in that area to draw attention? MORE MOONS! or if that left orb is a moon show more definition--it's very smooth looking.

Other then that very good...really like the contrast and the absence of colour does not harm the tag in the very least.

Re: Crimson Space

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 5:45 am
by Kraq
Thanks guys, I put textures on the moon things, but I guess it isn't enough. I'll retouch it soon.
And will work on the depth.

Also, I didn't have my net nor a space stock, so couldn't add that feeling to the bg :(

edit:V2 added

Re: Crimson Space

Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:40 pm
by fena
v2 is gorgeous.

Just loving how you added a bit more depth to really complete it.

Re: Crimson Space

Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:42 am
by BrokenSaint
Like what you did there :p but yeah the depth could be worked on