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[NSR] Slippery when..

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 7:07 am
by strangelove
Not an actual formal sig. :( Just a smaller version of a larger project.

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Gill Sans ExtraBold Display used for "WET" and Interstate Light used for small text. Or not. I'll have to go check the PSD. >_>

Re: [NSR] Slippery when..

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 9:40 am
by Toasty
I think its really nice.

I'm not the most technical critic round here, but your pieces always seem to appeal to me more than 99% of the AC. ;)

Only problem is - i dont think the 'T' looks quite right, looks kind of out of place compared to the 'W' and 'E'.

Re: [NSR] Slippery when..

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 12:55 pm
by SM-Count
Your lighting is weird, like you have three different lights that don't relate to each other.

Re: [NSR] Slippery when..

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 2:01 pm
by lavapockets
SM-Count wrote:Your lighting is weird, like you have three different lights that don't relate to each other.
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+1
The lighting is definitely throwing it off a bit. Also, on your W on the left hand side about 3/4 of the way down it looks like you haven't completely blended in the splash. The top of the E has a dark blue line where the splash it coming out, kind of throws off the effect.

I think you could totally tone down the effects of the splashing, go with a couple well placed ones that look the cleanest (like the middle of the W looks great) and focus on the lighting/color.

Re: [NSR] Slippery when..

Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 5:31 pm
by Miguez
really smooth.

It's insanely appealing.

Just work on the lighting, as someone said.

Re: [NSR] Slippery when..

Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 3:43 pm
by *BlackFox
Whoa! awesome sig.

Re: [NSR] Slippery when..

Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 12:36 pm
by strangelove
Thanks everyone! And yes, I'm poo at lighting. =( I'll have to work on that.