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Realism Tag??
Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 2:03 am
by lavapockets
This is my attempt at breaking out of our "AC Box". The stock is included and the rest of the pictures I used to create the background I took when I was in Rome a couple years ago. I always thought it would be fun to use them in a sig. This is my first real attempt at doing a sig like this, so I would appreciate any suggestions/ideas/dislike. Feel free to be as harsh as you like
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Re: Realism Tag??
Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 2:23 am
by cin
looks great lavapk. i'm not an expert on realism tag,
but all i can say is it has depth, emotion and a good
composition.
idk, i just like it.
Re: Realism Tag??
Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 5:44 am
by lavapockets
bump still needs critique
Re: Realism Tag??
Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 7:25 am
by Melez
Imo the wall next to her, or whatever it is kind of limits the whole tag. Make it smaller or perhaps use another stock.
Re: Realism Tag??
Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 8:20 pm
by fena
I think the text should be given a little more emphasis. Otherwise, it looks great for your first try.
Re: Realism Tag??
Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 8:56 pm
by lavapockets
Melez wrote:Imo the wall next to her, or whatever it is kind of limits the whole tag. Make it smaller or perhaps use another stock.
You know, my brother said the same thing. He absolutely hated the brown wall, and said it was too overpowering. There's nothing I can do about it now, I tried making it smaller but I would basically have to start over. I'll keep that in mind next time I try one though
Thnx fena!
