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WIP - Bill

Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:57 pm
by Kirkaldi
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Don't know what to do with this signature. =/ And, I really wanted to make something of it.

Here's the 2nd WIP:
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Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 10:40 am
by rek
Drop it and move on.
:)

Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 4:03 pm
by Kirkaldi
rek wrote:Drop it and move on.
:)

I really like the render. And, I actually made this sig, using your style for the Comic Book Heroes sig.

Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 4:09 pm
by rek
Kirkaldi wrote:
rek wrote:Drop it and move on.
:)

I really like the render. And, I actually made this sig, using your style for the Comic Book Heroes sig.


Just try a different style with the same render. If i dont like something, i close it and start from scratch.


lol

Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 4:47 pm
by Melez
^That's what I do a lot lately. Takes me at least 5 tries before I make one tag complete.
As for the sig, lacks something that will fill it up. Not sure what you should do though.

Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 5:12 pm
by 0l3n
In my opinion you shouldnt make it so smooth. Try to roughen it up and sharpen it to hell.

Just my 2 cents :D

Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 8:47 pm
by Kirkaldi
0l3n wrote:In my opinion you shouldnt make it so smooth. Try to roughen it up and sharpen it to hell.

Just my 2 cents :D

lol

Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:03 am
by Hostage
Hmmm, what class are you? I think you're a low novice. Hmm, I'm not sure though...what do you think rek? I would say a solid novice would be pushing it though. :) :roll: You should really take a look at my tags, yo. Cuz I'm like totally amazing see...see, see. Awesome, amirite? 8)

k, enough of that inside joke.

I'm assuming that "X" is a light source? Well then add the reflective light on to your render, sometimes ideas come to you when you're working on the smaller details. But if you're really dead on ideas then save the psd, store it away , and come back to it on a later date.

Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:40 am
by Kirkaldi
Well, my 2nd WIP version.

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Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:48 am
by rek
haha 8)


OT:

Sersly, start again. Try the render from a different angle.

Re: WIP - Bill

Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:57 am
by Kraq
Eww..
The colors are just plain bad...

And the c4d placement could use some work, it's like making you look into the center of it.
It has no flow.

And as rek said, start over. I think it's the render holding you back, find a better one.