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NSR Hellsing
Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 2:27 am
by Paranoia
V1.

V2.

CnC please.
Edit:added version 2 with fixed light source.
Re: NSR Hellsin
Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 2:28 am
by Crowley
Wow, that looks amazing

Re: NSR Hellsin
Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 7:17 am
by Dante
good comes first:
i really like the light beam , which also acts as the underline for the text.
now critics:
your light source didn't really match with the shadows, which makes it look a bit irritating
also i think a stronger light/dark contrast would make the signature a lil bit more exiting
maybe in combination whith a backround which got more sharp edges?
Re: NSR Hellsin
Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 7:55 am
by Paranoia
I feel kind of embarrassed that I didn't match the light source with the shadows
Thanks for the tip
Dante 
Re: NSR Hellsin
Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:36 am
by *BlackFox
It looks awesome!
Re: NSR Hellsin
Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 3:45 pm
by Miguez
Close to perfection.
The whole sig itself has a great composition and sexyness.

Re: NSR Hellsin
Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 11:45 am
by IceCrash
Thee_UniQue wrote:Close to perfection.
The whole sig itself has a great composition and sexyness.

k, i'm not really sure
i might be the noob here and not be right in what compo means but by what i know..
i've seen you say that the second time now.. the first was alright but in this one O.o
do you know what compo means? O.o
I swear i'm not trying to be rude lol
And sig looks great, nice text, good flow, maybe a little too simple, if you could work on compo a little bit + add 1 or 2 more colors, it'd be top notch imo cause even if it looks good it's kinda monotone right now, but what do i know about that, this looks like a very good wip, with lots of potencial xD What i mean is, when you first look at the sig you're like WOW but then 2 secs later after you look at the render, text, and his glasses and see the effects on his hair, and notice the bg of the sig, there's not really anything that makes wanna look at it again, i think u get me alredy so enough of saying the same thing xD
So yeah, looks great anyways

Re: NSR Hellsin
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 1:54 am
by Hostage
IceCrash wrote:Thee_UniQue wrote:Close to perfection.
The whole sig itself has a great composition and sexyness.

k, i'm not really sure
i might be the noob here and not be right in what compo means but by what i know..
i've seen you say that the second time now.. the first was alright but in this one O.o
do you know what compo means? O.o
I swear i'm not trying to be rude lol
As I was scrolling down I thought to myself "Argh,I doubt this kid even knows what composition means--probably just saw one of the other artist use it,". Then I luled when I saw your post. GG, Icecrash, now I don't have the meanie everytime.
testicle smiley face time for everyone! :3