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Evil bee

Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 7:53 pm
by Melez
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C'n'C please.

v2

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Re: Evil bee

Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 8:21 pm
by Miguez
It's the opposite of your other ones. :?

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:06 am
by Melez
What do you mean by that?

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:10 am
by Miguez
The style, the colour, the brightness, etc.

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:46 am
by rek
The darkness around the right looks unnatural. Focal is getting stabbed in the back by the stuff on the left, also by its brightness.

Right is too dark, left is too bright. :roll: But i <3 the stuff in the middle.

kiu, just needs a little cleaning. Text needs work too, try to incorporate into the piece, instead of slapping it on last.

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:48 am
by Melez
I may tone down the lighting and post another version soon. :roll:
And you know I suck at text! I can never get it to look good. :x

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:04 am
by Miguez
What does kiu mean? I've been wondering about it. :oops:

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:04 am
by rek
keep it up


nooooop

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:06 am
by Hostage
LOL! the smaller scaled purple version of the guy reminded me of that scene from " Charlie and the Chocolate Factory,"! xD

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Now I can't stop laughing.

Anyways...if you know you're not good with text just don't bother with it until you think you've reached a high enough level to handle that extra burden. Besides, not all tags neet text you just need to realize when and when not too. Also watch out for sharpening/"lighting" you're starting to pixelate the ends of the render resulting in pieces of whites showing up in various areas.

Btw scrap the border. As much as I love white borders they have a time and place and need to be done right. There's definitely no place for it here.


Damnit rek! I wanted to tell him and call him a noop but as soon as I hit "submit" I see your lame ass!! :x GRRRRRRRR

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:11 am
by Miguez
I am a noop indeed. :oops:

go comment my new noopie signatures :3

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:21 am
by DumboDii
Well it looks pretty nice. Right side might be little too dark but it doesn't bother me that much.

And as said you really should work on text. Not that I would be good with text but still I had to say it.

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 10:27 am
by rek
Hostage wrote:Damnit rek! I wanted to tell him and call him a noop but as soon as I hit "submit" I see your lame ass!! :x GRRRRRRRR

:d

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 10:38 am
by DumboDii
Wut ?

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 1:22 pm
by Kirkaldi
I really like the yellow stuff. :D

7.5/10

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:08 pm
by Melez
Hostage wrote:LOL! the smaller scaled purple version of the guy reminded me of that scene from " Charlie and the Chocolate Factory,"! xD

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Now I can't stop laughing.



loool

Anyways, took everyones advice: toned down the burn tool on the right, killed the borders, unsharpened him a bit, didn't work on lighting since everything is so bright, even if I did add a light source it wouldn't have made any difference.
Thanks everyone, though these are just very minor changes.

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@Hostage: O_O @ your sig. Didn't see a tag that good in a while.

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:48 pm
by Snoopy
I love Hostages sigs. They're so amazing.

@Melez's sig. I like what you've done.

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 11:16 pm
by Kirkaldi
Snoopy wrote:I love Hostages sigs. They're so amazing.

@Melez's sig. I like what you've done.

Lol, go on a gfx forum. Everyone will be better than Hostage. :shock:

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 3:08 am
by Snoopy
Yea but Hostage is cool. :love:

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 7:57 am
by Melez
Kirkaldi wrote:
Snoopy wrote:I love Hostages sigs. They're so amazing.

@Melez's sig. I like what you've done.

Lol, go on a gfx forum. Everyone will be better than Hostage. :shock:


Weren't you the one that said "there's nobody better then him" all the time? :wink:

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 7:59 am
by MasterKojito
rek wrote:
Hostage wrote:Damnit rek! I wanted to tell him and call him a noop but as soon as I hit "submit" I see your lame ass!! :x GRRRRRRRR

:d

Completely off topic, but my sister said that my work looks like something rek would make. So I have come to the conclusion that your my greatest influence. :)
edit:typo

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 8:10 am
by Hostage
Melez wrote:
Kirkaldi wrote:
Snoopy wrote:I love Hostages sigs. They're so amazing.

@Melez's sig. I like what you've done.

Lol, go on a gfx forum. Everyone will be better than Hostage. :shock:


Weren't you the one that said "there's nobody better then him" all the time? :wink:


Kirk is just a tool of his environment projecting what ever people tell him.... I told him two days ago to cool it with the compliments because when he goes overboard I get 16 year old twats throwing me the green eye as he gets other people follow him in praising me( besides I don't know how to react to compliments/ brown nosing. Hence another reason to get him to stop). Not to mention I said start exploring GFX outside the confined box and limited skill level of the AC if he wants to see what really can be done...apparently now everyone outside on GFX forums is better than me, oh well. * shrug* :wink:

You can never take what kirk says seriously-- atleast not until his balls drop. Till then he's just a cute little child who likes to play with grown ups. :P That came out so much dirtier and perverted then it was intended to be xD.

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:17 am
by rek
MasterKojito wrote:
rek wrote:
Hostage wrote:Damnit rek! I wanted to tell him and call him a noop but as soon as I hit "submit" I see your lame ass!! :x GRRRRRRRR

:d

Completely off topic, but my sister said that my work looks like something rek would make. So I have come to the conclusion that your my greatest influence. :)
edit:typo



Seriously :love:

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 11:16 am
by Swindler
Hostage wrote:
Melez wrote:
Kirkaldi wrote:[q uote="Snoopy"]I love Hostages sigs. They're so amazing.

@Melez's sig. I like what you've done.[/qu ote]
Lol, go on a gfx forum. Everyone will be better than Hostage. :shock:


Weren't you the one that said "there's nobody better then him" all the time? :wink:


Kirk is just a tool of his environment projecting what ever people tell him.... I told him two days ago to cool it with the compliments because when he goes overboard I get 16 year old twats throwing me the green eye as he gets other people follow him in praising me( besides I don't know how to react to compliments/ brown nosing. Hence another reason to get him to stop). Not to mention I said start exploring GFX outside the confined box and limited skill level of the AC if he wants to see what really can be done...apparently now everyone outside on GFX forums is better than me, oh well. * shrug* :wink:

You can never take what kirk says seriously-- atleast not until his balls drop. Till then he's just a cute little child who likes to play with grown ups. :P That came out so much dirtier and perverted then it was intended to be xD.


Damn signature worthy!

edit: damn, to many characters :(

Re: Evil bee

Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 6:37 pm
by IceCrash
lol hostage

love the second sig mate, really nice to see this kind of style from ya, i'd like to see more works of this kind from ya :D

great flow, nice effects, and the colour choice is wierd, but it's nice, so...

*borat voice* HI 5