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NLPR
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 3:06 pm
by MasterKojito
Hayyya

Re: NLPR
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 3:43 pm
by _Angels
i lol'ed xD
i have no idea wut im looking at xD i see clipping masks, overlay and screens
its a bit to messy imo *serious looking*
Re: NLPR
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 4:32 pm
by Miguez
Don't get it.
Seems like.. Weird.
Re: NLPR
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:11 pm
by RogueKiller
Thee_UniQue wrote:Don't get it.
Seems like.. Weird.
How helpful!
OnT:
Its very messy. From the picture of the killzone character to the city background to the C4Ds, its very hard to make out what it is, or what is going on.
Less C4D spamming and less of those white lines. Just needs less things with more focus on each individual thing.
Also, the baby with the hood on in the middle is creepy.
Re: NLPR
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:45 pm
by magisuns
i see a picture of some chick, thrown into a city thing with a killzone render and ALOTTTTTT of c4d. it looks interesting but everything looks so overexagerrated
oh wait rogue pretty much said everything already
well kiu :]
Re: NLPR
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 8:05 pm
by DumboDii
Yea it is really messy. Took me a while to spot the girl at there. I think it has potential to be verry impressive and good-looking but you went overboard with almost everything.
Re: NLPR
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 10:21 pm
by CrimsonNuker
AHHHHHH THE LINES X_X
Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:09 am
by MasterKojito
To clear things up, I used one c4d and no clipping masks. Also I think I am going to go back and work on this piece later, thanks to your criticism.
Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:29 am
by Panu
first thing i saw was the chicks boobs ... those are boobs right?
Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:11 am
by Nantosh
Well I really like it, so thar

Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 5:33 am
by Snoopy
Nantosh wrote:Well I really like it, so thar

Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 2:49 pm
by CrimsonNuker
_Panu_ wrote:first thing i saw was the chicks boobs ... those are boobs right?
WTF? *scrolls back up*
Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:00 pm
by hitokiri
Yeah think a lighter opacity on the lines or thinner ones might help? confusing as others mentioned. Unless you were tryin to say Love is confusing and chaotic, then maybe i could see it

Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:44 pm
by Miguez
CrimsonNuker wrote:_Panu_ wrote:first thing i saw was the chicks boobs ... those are boobs right?
WTF? *scrolls back up*
Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 5:22 pm
by *BlackFox
Not the best I have seen, but it's still pretty cool.. lulz
Re: NLPR
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:15 pm
by IceCrash
i really like the way this is done
i love it
only thing that bugs me is the lines, and the light of it, i think it's too bright in some parts, kinda hurt my eyes : o