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NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:10 pm
by _Angels
V1
V2

Version 2 has a more warm glow and lighting hmm did something with the background to make it a lil more full added some splatters with clipping mask at shoulders, thick lines at background and some more i cant remember LoL
V3

Lol while i looked at V2 i though it was a lil bit to dark =x
V4

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This time with Utada who has finally broke trough in the US yay go girl~!
my first japanese artist i have ever heard and now shes more amazing xD
hmm about the sig i almost did the same with BoA signature

just practise that technique untill i do it perefectly

eventho i like the BoA sig more @_@ the colors feel strange

or is that just me lol D:
c&c
ciao :3
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:16 pm
by Nantosh
It seems incomplete.
Just her, a blurry bg and some font?
Needs some spuzzzazz.
I'll direct you to .rek for that ^ ^
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:18 pm
by _Angels
ya i got the same feeling >.< maby its the spot at her shoulder wuts a bit empty D:
oh @ the blurry bg ya i think i blurred it tomuch xD
plus the lense flare wasnt a good idea at the end that lights up 2much of the stuff that was behnid it =p
ps : Lol@ redirecting to some1 else @_@ lol
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 11:04 pm
by Snoopy
I love the look of innocence in the Asian girls eyes. The background I'm not so keen on, but I don't know what it lacks. Overall well done. Looking forward to a V2
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 2:40 pm
by _Angels
Version 2 added

Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:38 am
by DumboDii
Starting to look good. I like V3 a lot. KIU !
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:42 pm
by Kirkaldi
DumboDii wrote:Starting to look good. I like V3 a lot. KIU !
Me too. It has better colors too.
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:15 pm
by _Angels
well if u guys want i could make an tutorial on this easy piece of pie

since ive nvr done one its gonna be my first time revealing all the secrets of the pandora's box :3 XD
or of BoA's

Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 8:41 pm
by Hostage
Is it just me or did the sizes change considerably in your sig space?! Anywhore, The typo here just doesn't seem as nice as it did in your first one....might just be the render choice.
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:45 pm
by _Angels
im not rlly sure what u mean but ya i made the stock in it bigger and the one in my suig is smaller cuz i merged the 2 in one and the forum considered it as one sig and every tag is only allowed to be 550px wide.
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 10:30 pm
by Hostage
I read through your post twice and I actually think heard a snap in my brain. But I digress, I think if you increased the opacity on your black text and didn't allow the background colour to show through it would give it a more cleaner look. Right now it looks a little clustered, also it looks like you forgot to sharpen your focal because her face is a little blurry.
Re: NSR / Ii'll be waiting for u
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 10:54 pm
by _Angels
Hmm im not so sure about this advise u gave lol..the sharped part yes i was forgettin that xD but the text meh..o_O added V4 lol
myself would go for V3 background etc and stock and for version 2 text.. imo.