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Creed 2

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 5:14 pm
by Melez
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I really like this one, c'n'c please!
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Re: Creed 2

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 5:16 pm
by DumboDii
Nice. Pretty simple but it works. You used da Vincis writing on the bg ?

Re: Creed 2

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 5:26 pm
by Hostage
Looks like the beginning of a sig-the composition between render and stock being put together- then you just stopped. Light source is absent so it throws your whole lighting off, depth is ok, all together forgettable sig. It just doesn't have anything to it that would make someone take a second glance.

My only suggestion would be to stop mass producing your sigs as if you're factory. Take your time and completely complete a sig. It's not a race.

Anyway, if you still have the .psd, I'd say move your focal point a little further from the center and keep going with this sig. It could become something epic.

Re: Creed 2

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 5:32 pm
by Melez
Hah, all in honesty this was a fast work, but I'm producing so many tags just because I feel inspired these days.
I have the PSD file, I'll see what I can do. About the light source too. Thanks.

Re: Creed 2

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 6:03 pm
by Miguez
Misses light source, I think it seems a bit over-dark.

Re: Creed 2

Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 8:36 pm
by Melez
Took your advice, made another version. The lighting is forced, but I can't do it at last minute like that. :/

@dumbo: Yeah, I did. They look fancy. ;p

Re: Creed 2

Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:09 am
by rek
Hostage already said all my thoughts on your tag.

Take your time on one piece. Think it through, your recent sigs have a lot of potential, but it looks like you stop halfway through. :roll:

kiu