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nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:44 pm
by Melez

Tried to do a tag with textures, paying attention to lighting and depth.
Comments please!
Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:57 am
by YangKang
I like it but somehow my eyes are getting drawed to the right side o_o Maybe try cutting down a bit more of the right and concentrate on pointing out the vocal a bit more. Just my opnion. 7,5/10 anyways
Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:31 pm
by Miguez
YangKang wrote:somehow my eyes are getting drawed to the right side
Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 12:34 pm
by Melez

Minor changes like the right side darkened a bit, sharpen, etc.
Without the little green on the right side at all, the whole tag looks too empty.
Thanks for the comments.
Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:04 pm
by Swindler
I like it :o IMO one of the best from you

Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:48 pm
by Kirkaldi
HejsaN wrote:I like it :o IMO one of the best from you

+1, but whats the text in the background?
Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:52 pm
by Melez
It says "Melez", lol. I'm not good at writing at some angle.
Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 9:19 pm
by lavapockets
I like this one alot. I can't find it now...but that pentool one you had was my favorite of yours so far. It was really cool...and it really inspired me to want to mess with the pen tool. You have a good eye, I just wish you would take your time with your work more often and really apply yourself

It's fun to see what you make then.
I gotta say this cuz I've wanted to for a while, and then I'll be done: You're always posting how you rushed things and how you're not entirely happy with them. It's a bit annoying to be asked to critique something when you didn't put your effort into, and it also shows in your work when you don't. Keep working hard! It's much better all around

Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:43 am
by CrimsonNuker
Its a bit empty to the right
Re: nsr ~ Dim Light
Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 4:36 am
by Melez
@Lava: I'm very glad, for the first part.
But for the second, well.... I say it only when I know made some mistakes, or when I look at the piece and say "Damn, this looks like poop". So sometimes, it's not like I didn't put effort to it, it's just that I cant see where I made a mistake clearly.
And I didn't say that for some time now. ;p
Thanks for the comments everyone.