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Well, I hope at least one person remembers me. I was a frequent visitor for a long time on the site. This the section that got me into PS and eventually photography. For reasons I cannot recall I left for almost a year, but I'm finally back. Haven't been working much on sigs but I did brush up some skills a couple months back with this TF2 themed work. Comments and such.

All I can saw is WOW. But, you brushed way too much.

Can you give me the stock or render?

Yea I think I smudged a full c4d somewhere and added bits of color where I wanted. The right hand has a little white over it; I was hoping that it would look like smoke but I dont think I achieved it. Maybe some more shadows or depth on it idk. I was just trying to brush up a little on my skills. The C4d on the helmet had to be the hardest part. The transition from guitar neck to c4d didnt go exactly as I had planned it either. Happy nonetheless.

heres the Render http://planetrenders.net/renders/displa ... pos=-29514

BTW I just noticed that there was a random black mark right above the helmet. Edited and reposted.

You need to work on compo and colouring. Everything looks pretty random and slapped on.

The orange stuff on top of his hat doesnt look like it should be there, it doesnt flow with the helmet.
All the c4d's ending abruptly, messes with depth and overall flow of the piece.
You have too many things going on at once all over the thing. Makes it looks chaotic and kills the focal.
The guitar neck to c4d transition.. try to make it a little more subtle.

Looks like you used signature making techniques to produce an LP.

5/10

I think i remember you and i've seen better. Sorry if i sounded harsh, just wanted to get my points across.

rek wrote:I think i remember you and i've seen better. Sorry if i sounded harsh, just wanted to get my points across.

I agree. I could have done away with 50% of it and it would be a lot better.

ughghgh 2 signatures. Edited again.