nsr
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:07 pm
Followed AAazumak's smoke tutorial, been some time since I followed a tut tbh. Done in like 10 minutes, and the outcome is kinda meh tbh.
C'n'C please.
C'n'C please.
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Re: nsr
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 2:23 am
I can't figure out what that "thing" is in the middle of your sig.
Re: nsr
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 4:17 am
At first i was like "cool.....what is it?" then i realized it was the covenant from halo
Re: nsr
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 4:28 am
CrimsonNuker wrote:At first i was like "cool.....what is it?" then i realized it was the covenant from halo
OHHH! lol
Re: nsr
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 5:36 pm
i never played halo, could someone plz explain?
Re: nsr
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:10 pm
TheComedian wrote:i never played halo, could someone plz explain?
The covenant = the bad guys...who turn good. Their aliens.
Re: nsr
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:29 pm
Haven't really played it, was a random render I found. ;d
Thanks everyone, though.
Thanks everyone, though.
Re: nsr
Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:01 am
hmm, well seriously it's a nice pic, very original.
In my opinion, the bottom left corner is way too blurred. Compared to the rest of the pic, you can see the bg through the smoke, but in that corner it's just pure blurr. Also your right shoulder is a lot more "precise" ( lack of better word) then the left part ( i still can't figure out if it's good or bad...TOO MUCH SMOKE
). ohh almost forgot, i also think there is too much light. It seems almost as if it was washed too many times and became that way.
overall, it has a lot of potential. I'm sure that by just working on the colors/contrast/saturation, for a big 10-15 minutes, you can improve it greatly.
Tip*
when judging a pic, a great deal plays the "reason" you created that pic. let me explain, in the smoke tut, he used a smoking skeleton, if he would have used just a random pic of some smoke, it would be judged as less good. Why? because with that skeleton, he makes like an inside joke: hey look, i'm using a smoking dead skeleton as example on how to make smoke. without it the pic is less worthy. (i'm re-reading my self and i'm not sure if i will be understood correctly. If not say so, and i'll try to make myself clearer.) (English is kinda my 3d language, but i still have no excuse)
p.s.
nice smoke/fog/cloud of vapors
In my opinion, the bottom left corner is way too blurred. Compared to the rest of the pic, you can see the bg through the smoke, but in that corner it's just pure blurr. Also your right shoulder is a lot more "precise" ( lack of better word) then the left part ( i still can't figure out if it's good or bad...TOO MUCH SMOKE
). ohh almost forgot, i also think there is too much light. It seems almost as if it was washed too many times and became that way.overall, it has a lot of potential. I'm sure that by just working on the colors/contrast/saturation, for a big 10-15 minutes, you can improve it greatly.
Tip*
when judging a pic, a great deal plays the "reason" you created that pic. let me explain, in the smoke tut, he used a smoking skeleton, if he would have used just a random pic of some smoke, it would be judged as less good. Why? because with that skeleton, he makes like an inside joke: hey look, i'm using a smoking dead skeleton as example on how to make smoke
. without it the pic is less worthy. (i'm re-reading my self and i'm not sure if i will be understood correctly. If not say so, and i'll try to make myself clearer.) (English is kinda my 3d language, but i still have no excuse)p.s.
nice smoke/fog/cloud of vapors