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Made a Manga [page 2 available now and subbed] [56k warning]

Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 10:40 pm
by poehalcho
It's based on Jean de la Fontaine's 'Le Rat Et Le Lion'. Gotta do it for french class, though I made a slight redesign of the story >8D

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Unfortunatly I had to sub the story in dutch, but here's a simple translation of what they say.

[page 1]
- God, I'm SO hungry!! I'd do anything for a steak *drew*.
- Huh..? This must be my lucky day! >:D
- OMG
- 'A mirage...'
- Yes...uhmm *cough*...I would like to appologize for my impoliteness and trying to eat you...Have a good life now...
- '...'
- I can't believe I just almost got eaten by this idiot. forget it, he's no danger -.-

[page 2]
- bagh, I can't believe I fell for a stupid mirage! I've got sand all over my body *spit*
- WHAT THE...
- HEY...hey you, help me out here will'ya. > do you promise you won't eat me?
- yes I promise...Now get me out
- ok >.>
- aaahh...ouch > kekeke
- well...thank you for freeing me...ouch. > no problem < wanna be friends? >.> < alright...
- So...how come you didn't cut the net with yor claws? < shut up...



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please tell me your thoughts on my art...:D

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Re: Made a Manga [56k warning]

Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 11:46 pm
by Hostage
Do you want me to ink it for you using photoshop (once you get your text up that is)? It'll give it a more finished, clean, professional look. It might even get you a better grade. :P

Re: Made a Manga [56k warning]

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:18 am
by Kirkaldi
Oh wow, I'm really impressed, I thought you were epic fail. :P

Re: Made a Manga [56k warning]

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 5:18 am
by CrimsonNuker
Big picture is big.

Re: Made a Manga [56k warning]

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:01 am
by poehalcho
Hostage wrote:Do you want me to ink it for you using photoshop (once you get your text up that is)? It'll give it a more finished, clean, professional look. It might even get you a better grade. :P


I'd love it, but there's probably no time. It's gotta be finished by monday or tuesday, I'm not even sure when exactly. I still gotta draw page 2 T_____T

Re: Made a Manga [56k warning]

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:57 am
by *BlackFox
pretty cool drawing you got there, well done!
CrimsonNuker wrote:Big picture is big.

+1

Re: Made a Manga [56k warning]

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:01 pm
by poehalcho
EDIT: oh Sh*t wrong topic D:

Re: Made a Manga [56k warning]

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:35 pm
by Hostage
poehalcho wrote:
Hostage wrote:Do you want me to ink it for you using photoshop (once you get your text up that is)? It'll give it a more finished, clean, professional look. It might even get you a better grade. :P


I'd love it, but there's probably no time. It's gotta be finished by monday or tuesday, I'm not even sure when exactly. I still gotta draw page 2 T_____T


Shame. Well if you do find the time just send it to me via pm, I'm usually on PS anyway inking my own work for DA so I wouldn't mind throwing yours into the mix either. :)

Re: Made a Manga [56k warning]

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 12:41 pm
by poehalcho
i'd say go ahead, but I can't gaurantee it'll be put to use :/
i'm on xfire if you need me.

Re: Made a Manga [page 2 available now] [56k warning]

Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:49 pm
by poehalcho
I've done page 2 now. sorry Hostage you can cancel the inking. it's too late to do anything now.
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Re: Made a Manga [page 2 available now and subbed] [56k warning]

Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:11 am
by Hostage
Well--maybe some other time then. One where you're not tied down to a dead line. :)

Re: Made a Manga [page 2 available now and subbed] [56k warning]

Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:21 am
by hemagoku
mm is that english ? xD