Made a Manga [page 2 available now and subbed] [56k warning]

[poehalcho]

It's based on Jean de la Fontaine's 'Le Rat Et Le Lion'. Gotta do it for french class, though I made a slight redesign of the story >8D

READ FROM LEFT TO THE RIGHT
Unfortunatly I had to sub the story in dutch, but here's a simple translation of what they say.

[page 1]
- God, I'm SO hungry!! I'd do anything for a steak *drew*.
- Huh..? This must be my lucky day! >:D
- OMG
- 'A mirage...'
- Yes...uhmm *cough*...I would like to appologize for my impoliteness and trying to eat you...Have a good life now...
- '...'
- I can't believe I just almost got eaten by this idiot. forget it, he's no danger -.-

[page 2]
- bagh, I can't believe I fell for a stupid mirage! I've got sand all over my body *spit*
- WHAT THE...
- HEY...hey you, help me out here will'ya. > do you promise you won't eat me?
- yes I promise...Now get me out
- ok >.>
- aaahh...ouch > kekeke
- well...thank you for freeing me...ouch. > no problem < wanna be friends? >.> < alright...
- So...how come you didn't cut the net with yor claws? < shut up...






please tell me your thoughts on my art...

Spoiler!

ps. yay the first topic I made with a 56k warning

[Hostage]

Do you want me to ink it for you using photoshop (once you get your text up that is)? It'll give it a more finished, clean, professional look. It might even get you a better grade.

[Kirkaldi]

Oh wow, I'm really impressed, I thought you were epic fail.

[CrimsonNuker]

Big picture is big.

[poehalcho]

Do you want me to ink it for you using photoshop (once you get your text up that is)? It'll give it a more finished, clean, professional look. It might even get you a better grade.

I'd love it, but there's probably no time. It's gotta be finished by monday or tuesday, I'm not even sure when exactly. I still gotta draw page 2 T_____T

[*BlackFox]

pretty cool drawing you got there, well done!

Big picture is big.

+1

[poehalcho]

EDIT: oh Sh*t wrong topic D:

[Hostage]

Do you want me to ink it for you using photoshop (once you get your text up that is)? It'll give it a more finished, clean, professional look. It might even get you a better grade.

I'd love it, but there's probably no time. It's gotta be finished by monday or tuesday, I'm not even sure when exactly. I still gotta draw page 2 T_____T

Shame. Well if you do find the time just send it to me via pm, I'm usually on PS anyway inking my own work for DA so I wouldn't mind throwing yours into the mix either.

[poehalcho]

i'd say go ahead, but I can't gaurantee it'll be put to use :/
i'm on xfire if you need me.

[poehalcho]

I've done page 2 now. sorry Hostage you can cancel the inking. it's too late to do anything now.

Spoiler!

[Hostage]

Well--maybe some other time then. One where you're not tied down to a dead line.

[hemagoku]

mm is that english ? xD