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NSR~Altair

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:56 pm
by dude1977956
First of white bg sigs ever tried
Image
anything constructive would help...so success or fail?

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:57 pm
by Melez
It looks kind of filtery, but it's ok, everything's in place.

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:36 am
by dude1977956
whats ok? good? bad?

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:57 am
by Kirkaldi
Fix up the font and fill up the white spaces. Otherwise, it just looks bad.

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 5:45 am
by Montolio
Kirkaldi wrote:Fix up the font and fill up the white spaces. Otherwise, it just looks bad.


Don't need to "fill" the white spaces, as negative space is just as important as the positive. I would work with a little bit of the negative space you have, but don't clutter it. Maybe some light accents?

It doesn't look bad, but is lacking something...that I can't put my finger on.

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:08 pm
by Priam
Personally, i'm a bg fan of white space, as I believe it's one of the best, and easiest design elements.

Yet the render has been used 100 times before, and the style aroudn the render as well.

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:23 pm
by DumboDii
I have to agree that render is used so many times. But I don't blame you cos I have same problem. It's simple and nice but some lightning effect would spice it up. Text could be better also.

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 10:00 pm
by .Banshee
The text is boring. It's just there looking like a big BLAH. Also put on a lighting source and take advantage of the lighting that the render already offers.

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 10:05 pm
by Verfo
[quote="Kirkaldi]Otherwise, it just looks bad.[/quote]
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It looks fine, just change the text. Looks nice overall. ^^

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 3:54 am
by dude1977956
DumboDii wrote:I have to agree that render is used so many times. But I don't blame you cos I have same problem. It's simple and nice but some lightning effect would spice it up. Text could be better also.

so what kind of lighting should I use? I already put several gradient maps and soflights on
Verfo wrote:[

alright I'll change the text soon..getting to thast tomorrow

Re: NSR~Altair

Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 4:26 am
by Kraq
I think you should start to use Dude instead of Dude(x)
It's too long =o