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[Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 4:38 pm
by ravenear
Re: [Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:35 pm
by Squirt
Not bad, hope that Hostage gives you comments they'll help.
What I can say is that you need to work on blending.
Re: [Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:36 pm
by Kraq
These three are the best.
Look for some tutorials and your set.
http://planetrenders.net/forums/index.php?&showforum=81 best for beginners
If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
Re: [Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:48 pm
by DumboDii
ravenear wrote:

Am I only one thinking that those focals are stretched ? You should work with texts too. But nice start KIU.
Re: [Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:34 pm
by Kirkaldi
+1 to Kraq and DumboDii. kiu
Re: [Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:14 am
by RogueKiller
Those are shit. They make you worse. All they teach you is how to spam C4Ds and abuse the smudge tool.
Anyways...
Work on blending, Lighting and colors.
Your pieces have C4Ds all over the place. Try to control your effects so they look better.
As for lighting, think in terms of reality. If the light is coming from the left side of the face, the left side of the face should be lit, not the right.
Re: [Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 12:26 am
by CrimsonNuker
Ugh this is the thing i hate to see most. Stretched renders.
Re: [Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:13 am
by Squirt
Yeah I have to agree with Rouge Killer, you won't learn anything unless you personally play around with all of the tools.
You should also press f1 and learn about all of the different things that you can do with Photoshop.
Re: [Gallery]wildy0wns (me)
Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 6:13 pm
by _Angels
ya like ppl above me said alrddy most look like stretched stocks and renders u should try hold shift and make the stock smaller at top right or left or bottem right or left nvr make it smaller by top or right or left or else the stock doesnt look natural or is way stretched out anyways.
next to that i see alot of sigs with c4ds i guesse thats oke if ur a starter but if u would like to try something else with the c4d try making a other background with c4d use for a different kind of purpose, try putting it on soft light or overlay and smudge some of the spots where u can see its a c4d so it gives a more blending effect. Also try to find the good colors

that match and are easy for the eye.
here is a sample of a good color sites :]
http://www.colourlovers.com/I would also try to put one last layer on the sig on overlay or an other blending option so the stocks would blend in more.
KIU

love and peace :3